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Paper Hearts

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Alanora Calaran

PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:26 am


...You guys are so not lucky that I found my stash of poetry. XD

Paper Hearts

This paper’s torn, dissected
Into fragile little hearts;
They blow away, neglected,
With their brittle counterparts.

Trickling from the table
To be scattered on the ground,
No troubled heart seems able
To be rescued, felt or found.

Broken, crushed and shifted,
Edges buried in the sand,
They unaware are lifted
By some kind, unlikely hand.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:33 pm


This is good. Weird how you can make a subject so melancholic sound so light;but the rhythm is good,it has an even flow and the words are deep yet to the point. All in all,well done!

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Santinka
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:26 pm


It is rare to see such a thing happen, but a blessing when it does. Lovely.
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