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Music -Misfit-
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:56 pm


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I wrote this a couple of weeks ago, and it's one of a set of songs that I was/am writing for my friends. Anyway, it's one of the first songs I've written, so it's not fantastic, but tell me what you think?
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I Want to Say
Well, I don't know how to tell you.
But it's time to swim or sink.
And all the things that you do
make it hard for me to think.

I wanna say I love you,
want you to say the same.
I love your smile, your eyes, your hair, your lips,
the way you say my name.
I wanna hold you tight now,
and whisper in your ear.
Your embrace leaves a trace on my heart
even when you're not here.
And these things you make me feel?
I know they're for real.

So I guess it's now or never.
There's no time left to prepare.
There's really nothing better
than right now and right here.

I wanna say I love you,
want you to say the same.
I love your smile, your eyes, your hair, your lips,
the way you say my name.
I wanna hold you tight now,
and whisper in your ear.
Your embrace leaves a trace on my heart
even when you're not here.
And these things you make me feel?
I know they're for real.

I gotta spit it out.
I wanna say it now.
'Cause if I hesitate,
it's too little, much too late.

I wanna say I love you,
want you to say the same.
I love your smile, your eyes, your hair, your lips,
the way you say my name.
I wanna hold you tight now,
and whisper in your ear.
Your embrace leaves a trace on my heart
even when you're not here.
And these things you make me feel?
I know they're for real.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:51 am


good lyrics, but did u see the advice i posted in your thread "Try not to Cry" or something?

hardcore_sk8r272


Music -Misfit-
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:25 pm


hardcore_sk8r272
good lyrics, but did u see the advice i posted in your thread "Try not to Cry" or something?
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Thanks, and yeah, I saw your advice...I've been too deeply taught about grammar to abandon it, but I do understand what you mean, I'll keep it in mind when I write.
And I checked out that band, The Chase. I like them, but I don't get that song you had me listen to. >.<

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:59 pm


Music -Misfit-
hardcore_sk8r272
good lyrics, but did u see the advice i posted in your thread "Try not to Cry" or something?
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Thanks, and yeah, I saw your advice...I've been too deeply taught about grammar to abandon it, but I do understand what you mean, I'll keep it in mind when I write.
And I checked out that band, The Chase. I like them, but I don't get that song you had me listen to. >.<

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i know it takes time, google search the lyrics i dont wanna spoil it for you cuz when u get it, you will realize how good they are

hardcore_sk8r272

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