These are lyrics to the very first metalcore song I made. Capital letter words are screamed and words in '()' are harmonized.
You can see a sample of the tune here...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQmAITmRc9AAny criticism in lyrics and guitar riff are appreciated.
Falling back to before [Intro]
[Intro riff]
[Verse 1a]
I THINK ABOUT IT ALL THE TIME
UNTIL IM TRAPPED INSIDE MY MIND
Don’t you know that 3 small words can make this all better
SO MANY THINGS ABOUT US TO AMMEND
DAMN THOSE WORDS I HAVE LOST YOUR HEART AGAIN
Everytime I see your anger IT DESTROYS ME
[First pre chorus 1a]
And all this frustration has made me in denial
Trapped in the bottom of your mind we suffer all these trials
As we are forced to isolate ourselves from love
One more after another OUR LOSSES THRIVE
[Second pre chorus 1a]
GO
[Chorus 1a]
I CAN’T HOLD IT ANYMORE
MY TEARS WILL TELL ALL
FILLED WITH TENSION
I AM READY TO DROWN FOR YOUR LOVE
HURRY AND ANSWER ME NOW
(WAIT FOR ME DEAR I BELIVE THIS CAN BE DONE)
DON’T LET ME DIE WITH THIS KNIFE IN MY HEART
(I KEPT MY PROMISE ALL THIS TIME AND SWORE YOU WERE THE ONE)
DYING IN THIS REALITY
(I WOULD WANT YOU EVEN THIS LAST TIME)
I WOULD RATHER FALL BACK TO BEFORE
(LET ME KNOW Y OU LOVE ME TO BEFORE I DIE)
[Transition]
[Verse 2a]
TODAY YOU KILL ME WITH YOUR FURRY
YOUR INTENSE INCOMPASSION NOW WORRIES ME
I though that love was real until faith had killed us inside
NOW ALL WE DO IS RUN FURTHER FROM THE TRUTH
AND LET THESE PROBLEMS EAT AWAY OUR LOVE OF YOUTH
Indirect anger upon drifting away MADE US HATE
[First pre chorus 2a]
And all this frustration has made me in denial
Trapped in the bottom of your mind we suffer all these trials
As we are forced to isolate ourselves from love
One more after another OUR LOSSES THRIVE
[Second pre chorus 2a]
GO
[Chorus 2a]
I CAN’T HOLD IT ANYMORE
MY TEARS WILL TELL ALL
FILLED WITH TENSION
I AM READY TO DROWN FOR YOUR LOVE
HURRY AND ANSWER ME NOW
(WAIT FOR ME DEAR I BELIVE THIS CAN BE DONE)
DON’T LET ME DIE WITH THIS KNIFE IN MY HEART
(I KEPT MY PROMISE ALL THIS TIME AND SWORE YOU WERE THE ONE)
DYING IN THIS REALITY
(I WOULD WANT YOU EVEN THIS LAST TIME)
I WOULD RATHER FALL BACK TO BEFORE
(LET ME KNOW Y OU LOVE ME TO BEFORE I DIE)
[Transition]
[Break]
LETS GO!!!!!!!
MY MIND IS SHATTERING
A CLOUD HAS BEEN CASTED OVER ME
YOUR HARSH WORDS PIERCE ME LIKE A BULLET
LEAVING ME SCATHING OVER YOUR OLD WAYS
[Piano]
Im am so lost without you
I am nothing but a broken mirror
That casts your reflection
As you run all over my imagination
I can no longer go on like this
I can’t bear to see you hate me
After you have sworn your love
Now what have you become?
Say goodbye for the last time
Leave me broken out of my mind
All the moments we have crushed
All is wasted
Now aren’t you ashamed
3 words made it go away
Now you break it apart
Making me force my heart out
Say goodbye for the last time
(Well you cut me open)
Leave me broken out of my mind
All the moments we have crushed
(Now I cant retain the wounds that I cry)
All is wasted
Now aren’t you ashamed
3 words made it go away
Now all you do is break it apart
[Solo intro]
[Guitar solo]
[Break]
MY MIND IS SHATTERING
A CLOUD HAS BEEN CASTED OVER ME
LEAVING ME TO ABANDEON ALL HOPE
BABY COME BACK TO ME
[Outro]
[Dramatic build]
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