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 Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:07 am
I knew you once,so long ago;
When peace was true and life felt real.
Those moments we stole,away from the world,
They meant so much to me;my most treasured years.
I miss those times we spent alone;
I looked up to you,my very breath you'd steal.
But since you've gone,this isn't home.
No more joy or bliss for this place I feel.
Now you've changed,you don't see me anymore.
How much I wish I knew you still.
I knew you once,so long ago;
When life had meaning and innocence was real.
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:48 pm
I think it's very strange that we seem to share similar feelings,yet express them so completely differently.
I am so twisted and simply mad,while you are clean and to the point,
I have definitely enjoyed reading your work the past few days!
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:29 pm
Heh heh;we seem to,don't we? Though I do have a poem or two that are completely different from the ones I've posted here;a little more twisted and such.
Anyways,I'm glad to be of service!
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