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Macabre Forever

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:11 am


Dreams still bind my discontented lover and myself.
I want to break the psychic link we share,the only bond we still share.
I hate you I've hated you for years,watching you destroy all I ever believed in.
If I go blind I would still suffer the sight of you,till death,in these wretched dreams.
I Love You and wish nothing but misery upon you.
Souls cannot be unbound no,
I shall suffer the torment of your love even in death,
You will be my devil,my dark angel.
I am worthless without you my love,torn,
split between the pure love we once shared and,
the agony of knowing it shall never exist again.
I hate myself,I hate you,
I hope the pain you have inflicted is returned to you in some
horrible twist,a guise that presents itself as lovingly
as you once did.
A Curse Upon You,
Your House,
All Your Dreams
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:58 am


This is good;it has a nice flow and it's very deep and expressive. And I have certainly felt like this before;still do,actually. I'm a little uncomfortable with the punctuation on some lines;but maybe it's just me. Overall,I like it very much.

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Macabre Forever

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:13 pm


I understand what you mean about my punctuation,its crazy and very basic.
That period said stop;
that said pause and the comma,
is just a break in my thoughts.
Sorry,but I'm getting better!
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:27 pm


That's the spirit! I can see you improving already.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:31 pm


Talk about your love-hate relationship.
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