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 Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:58 am
A rainbow of emotions
that no one ever sees.
A rainbow of emotions
dwells deep inside of me.
Red is for anger;
Sometimes it stands for love.
Orange is the flame that burns;
the courage to face each day.
Yellow is the sun, shining down from above,
that brings light to the world
and warmth to my soul.
Green is for the jealousy
that occasionally consumes me.
Blue is the sadness
always present in the background.
Purple is the self-doubt;
I feel it every day.
It resides with blue
in the shadows of my mind.
Another colour, not of the rainbow.
Black for the dark thoughts
that threaten to o'er come me.
This is my rainbow of emotions
that no one ever sees.
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:20 am
The flow seems a little awkward to me in some lines;but otherwise it's good.
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:26 am
I agree with Lilithmae,but it was kinda fun to read!
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