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 Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:32 am
well its been a while since i cranked out a poem but here it is i wrote it a few days ago no nothing happened XD
Rose's are red but
My heart is blue
I feel like dying
Thanks to you
You say your sorry
I say im through
I have to move on
And get over you
They say its easy
But im not so sure
I feel like death
Is the only cure
I should just forget
And not take it that far
But i just bottle it up
And stick it in a jar
That will do for now
But you can be the judge
Its like a knife to my wrist
Just give it a plunge
Let it all out
And give it some room
I can hardly breath
I need to see you
Why cant i you see
Why did u leave
Your killing me...
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:44 pm
"Why cant i you see"
Was that a typo? Other then that, great poem, very heartfelt and emotional. Because you said "no nothing happened," I'm not gonna freak out and think you're suicidal XD
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