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Confessions - By Namikaze Kaiyoko (Warnings: Spoiler to 437)

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Namikaze Kaiyoko

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:37 am


There weren't many things in Hinata's life that she had done that she would deem "Stupid." She was always the quiet and reserved type, not a trouble maker. Maybe that's why he attracted her so much.

Well, that and his kind nature. And fine, his looks did have some part in it. The guy was a walking Adonis, with that olive tan and golden hair, not to mention those bright blue eyes that seemed to search the soul, deeper than even the byakugan. He could have made any woman who took the time to look melt. But she was glad no one really did. It meant she had more for herself.

But now that she was standing here, she had to wonder... WHAT ON EARTH POSSESSED HER TO DO THIS?

It was ridiculous to think of taking on Pein, especially without backup. It was stupid, one of the dumbest things she had ever done, and she was still wondering why she was still here. She was shy, quiet, little Hinata-chan, who always took the role of backup. She hated being on the front lines, loathed it even.

But something about seeing Naruto like that, the one person she looked up to no matter what, the one person she loved... Something about seeing that had caused her to snap. Without even stopping to think, she jumped in front of Naruto, preventing Pein from killing him, or whatever his aim was at the moment.

To be honest, she was probably the only one who could handle Pein. Her attacks would destroy him, after all, once the charka receptors were gone, he was just another dead body. And Juukin style was made to target chakra. But Pein had experience, and a lot more chakra.

"Hinata-chan!"

His voice snapped her out of her small monologue with a sudden realization.

She had done it.

She had managed to change.

"Get out of here! You're no match for him!"

Well, he was right, but someone had to protect him. And she wanted to be the one.

And this was the time.

"I'm not afraid to die protecting you, because I love you."  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:40 am


ninja Ninja Kyuubi Strikes! ninja
(Now with Pinwheel of DOOM!)

AN: I wrote this while looking at Chapter 437, so it should seem a little familiar. It's basically what I think was going through Hinata's head at the time.

Again, I feel it's a bit short, but I can't seem to find a way to make it longer... it seems good as is... (Cuz you should know what happens next...)

And this is a special fic that you won't find anywhere else, I wrote it just for this guild. So enjoy!

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[tank contains: 1 Cuttlefish, 2 Hermitcats, 1 Spiky, 1 Penguin, 1 Jellyfish, 1 Killer Whale, 1 Starfish, 1 Dolphin, 1 Skittles Fish]
 

Namikaze Kaiyoko

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:46 pm


Good job on this. It makes me feel special cause I'm one of the few that will get to read this. ^-^
PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 1:39 pm


...I think it could be longer. I have some ideas.... but I think I critique too much as it is. sweatdrop

It's wonderful, and I think the only way you could get closer to Hinata's feelings is telling *cough* bribing *cough* Kishimoto to tell you. You described it well and the only thing that describes this in it's true form is saying it's "short and sweet". heart

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:56 pm


I thought it was cute. I'm not really one to give a lot of critique. But it really seems like something Hinata would be thinking during that time.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 4:59 am


I think you really captured the moment. 3nodding

Kunoichi Aiko


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:21 am


It makes me happy the you are in my guild ^.^

This one shot was awesome
PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:48 pm


Yay! Special fanfic for this guild!!! It makes me feel like this guild is even more awesome than I originally thought it was xd

I think that was awesome, it does seem like what Hinata would be thinking. Me, I'm not so great at being in other people's shoes (metaphorically). sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:25 pm


And yet, it still shows no reactions from Naruto from mangas above. (What I mean is that even after that chapter, it seems like that Naruto still doesn't understand.
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