I'm having trouble to start my novel... But this is what I have thus far: (not much, I know)
It was a clear spring's night. The first warm night in what felt like a century. The glorious full moon reigned over he darkening blue while her children opened their eyes and yawned. The sun kissed his puffy clouds goodbye, causing them to blush all shades of pink and yellow. Perhaps the most beautiful sunset I've ever seen...
~ any comments and advise (even ideas) will be appretiated... 3nodding
~ please note that my original home language is Afrikaans and not English, but I'm trying my very best.
~ I'm eager to learn so please help me!?
Moonlit Petals is about a girl (Ayami Takahashi, based on me) who is a sorceress, but has yet to discover that secret. She's on the stage when she wants to find herself and the deeper she dig, the more "visible" she becomes to the bad guys (demons, such as The beast of Gevaudan)...
Tell me if it's a good idea and a good entry paragraph, please? And then I'll seee if I'd like to continue... (please help me with my writing style as well?)
Thank you 4laugh
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