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 Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:26 pm
Hey guys, I just thought I might post my idea. I want to note that this idea so far has not gotten quite finished and I want you guys to tell me whats good and bad so I can improve on it. Also for all I know this is my original idea, so if you see another mange idea similar please tell me! Thanks! biggrin
Hikaro is a teenage boy who doubts everything. He is constantly flustered by daydreams and ideas of how such higher powers or a Paradise could exist. While skipping class to daydream, something comes out of the skies he wishes he could be in. Believing it was an angel, he goes to check it out. At the crash site was a beautiful girl, about the same age as him, meets him to show him Paradise. In the alternate realm she takes Hikaro to, is what he wanted to see. A beautiful land awaits him. But, an uprising in military forces seizes the realm and Hikaro is forced to save it and the girl that brought him to it.
It's a little cheesy, but it's the best idea I've come up with yet. I was thinking of naming the girl Nara, but does it sound good at all???
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:55 pm
Um i like it ok here i go...yes sounds intersting!!!
.If your unsure about the name go to wikipedia and type in list of angels and see if theres a female name you like there.
.Maybe you say why they would want to seize this realm what objectives is there some genral with ambition to be king,or a cure to a disease,or a weapon of some kind?(not sure if i followed but here ya go sweatdrop )
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:46 am
Thanks for your feedback =) I'll look into Wikipedia for some names since I am unsure. And believe me, I have been thinking of a motive for the enemy, that very thought is what destroyed my previous idea...
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