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Alanora Calaran

PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:08 pm


I put this one up in the arena, but I figured I'd post it here too because I liked writing it so much. heart

Grown

We are grown, rare and beautiful
Among the pale and lacking.
We are cultivated, nursed and loved,
Encouraged to stand tall;
But whichever way the wind will blow,
It takes us on its whim
And breaks our tiny, fragile stems
As we lay sprawling on the ground below.

I’d rather be a tree than a flower,
Unable to be snapped by wind
And ever able to touch the sky;
To find the light therein.

We are grown, bright and shining
Among the dull and darkness.
Our hearts are ever refracting
The light that makes us glitter;
But whichever way the hammer falls,
It takes us on its whim
And breaks our solid outer shells
To find the beauty lodged within those walls.

I’d rather be a pebble than a gem,
Dull and undisturbed by man
And ever able to roll away
To far-off, distant lands.

I was grown, small but daring
Among the sea of sameness.
My eyes were ever searching
For the dream of living loved;
But whichever way the spirit flew,
It took me on its whim
And it broke my heart a thousand times
Before I found that I was born anew.

I’d rather be alone than like others,
Have passion in my dancing tread,
And ever able to find myself
When all my dreams have fled.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:41 am


That was beautiful,I loved it!Is there suppose to be such a deep meaning to it or was that an accident?

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Alanora Calaran

PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:17 am


Well, since it was meant to be turned into a modern music piece, I chose every metaphor with great care while trying to express my idea. I guess it's just a roundabout way of saying I wanted a lot of imagery while still making the emotion very clear.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:41 pm


I'd say you achieved that and more! It's wonderful. Truly wonderful.

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Santinka
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:21 pm


I'm putting you on my "Authors to Watch Out For" list. Absolutely beautiful.
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