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Celeanor

Dangerous Hunter

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:19 pm



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Name: Onelah [ Oh- nay- lah ]
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Craft: Smithcraft, Gem-setting
Rank: Apprentice
Muse Song: This is My Road - Saga





Physical Description:

Delicate Onelah looks, for all the world, like a collector's porcelain doll with her clear, blemish free, skin; especially when compared against the stereotype of her craft. Petite and fine boned, her limbs (especially her fingers) are long and slender, and despite her lack of height she gives off the appearance of fine proportions. Luckily, she doesn't have much use for the kind of muscles her fellow smiths are renowned for, so she doesn't feel the burden of being too small or too weak to do what she needs to do. Her hair, however, is a point of pride. Long, thick, and a glossy raven black, Onelah maintains her hair like some girls watch their fingernails. Her favored manner of wearing it while working is usually a severe bun at the back of her head, tied tightly with a white ribbon. Outside of the smithy, she still wears it up, but prefers elaborate up-dos with all sorts of experimental hair clips and ribbons twined throughout. Her eyes are a warm hazel, and are angled slightly to give her an exotic look.




Personality:

Serene and aloof are the best words to describe this particular young woman. She is never seen indulging in the antics of her fellows, or anything other then her work really. As a result, she is often regarded as an enigma, even to those who deal with her on a regular basis. She keeps her thoughts and her feelings closely guarded, leading some to believe the rumor that the gems she fashions have a greater capacity for empathy then she does. That is, however, far from true. Onelah is quite capable of understanding and feeling emotion, she just refuses to let emotions cloud the serenity of her reason. She finds safety in her silent assessment of the world around her, since in keeping her own judgments to herself, she feels safe from the judgments of others. Her intellect and ability to calmly apply logic and common sense to any situation comes across loud and clear to those few people who bother to take note of her, but mostly Onelah is seen as just a 'good girl,' you know, the kind that is seen, but not heard.

Oddly, that last assessment is one that manages to work it's way beneath her skin when she comes across it. Onelah certainly has her own opinions, but she is hesitant to share them outside her own small circle of trusted friends. She is quite fearful of being misunderstood and ridiculed for her ideas, and fails to realize that if she were to socialize a bit more, she'd likely become a bit better at the 'game.' The calm serenity of reason is just as welcome a mantle to those that communicate well as it is to someone like her, who uses it to shield herself from view.


History:

Discovered at an early age to have nimble fingers and a fine eye for detail, Onelah was apprenticed to the local Smith Hall in Ista Hold by her fisherfolk family, who (coincidentally) had already had three of their older children apprenticed with the Istan smithy. Transplants that they were, Onelah's family is still in that awkward transition phase. Both of her parents were raised in Ista, but her grandparents originally hailed from further north. The youngest girl, though not the youngest child, Onelah certainly missed her family terribly through that tough separation period, but she rallied soon enough once she began to learn the basics of jewelry making when she was 13. Her family was rather proud of their four smithcrafting children, and figured their retirement from fishing and the investment in the future just about set.

Eventually following her primary mentor to Ista Weyr when that exalted personage received several commissions and decided to deliver them by hand, Onelah's first look at the 'lush life of the Weyrs' came as something of a shock when she was 17. She hadn't been expecting the overcrowding, nor the flagrant disrespect some showed her master. (Little did she know that the doughty old man was earning each and every dirty look, since he was something of a womanizer.) Needless to say, she was looking forward to heading home when she was informally asked if she would be interested in staying for a little while... just for the next clutch. Initially saying 'no,' she soon rethought that plan once her master started receiving more commissions, and she as pressed into jewelry repair and other odd-jobs to offset the costs of staying in the Weyr long enough for her master to complete his new projects. The brownrider, a young wingrider with a grumpy dragon, stopped by once more to see if she may have changed her mind on the behest of his brown... and to his surprise (and likely hers as well) she agreed.


Pets: None
Other/Talents: Is exceptionally good at paying attention to detail, though is not quite as good in the creativity department as current fashion and competition dictates.

Will this character be a candidate? Yes

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:20 pm


Notes: This is a future character.

Also, Onelah is kinda... 'bare bones' at the moment... and something just seems off. Anyone have any suggestions?

Celeanor

Dangerous Hunter


giftwrapped

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:50 pm


I don't know all that much about smithcraft, but I imagine there's a whole lot to learn before apprentices are actually set to setting gems...particularly since gems are valuable and making mistakes isn't exactly awesome when you're working with really expensive stuff. I could perhaps understand her focus if she came from, say, a jewelcrafting family. It would be more plausible and seem a bit less overtly...'special,' for lack of a better word.

Also, her appearance would be pretty rare for Pern, particularly Ista. Nobody on the island stays fair for long.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:09 pm


Point on the expensive gems, but I guess I was figuring she would be tinkering with low quality stuff and the 'setting' doesn't mean cutting the stone itself. More fashioning the metal around it so it works? *considers how to word that into the profile* Maybe I'll make her folks smiths... but then they'd be from Telgar.... *debates* Also, apprentices have to work on stuff to get better, so to say she doesn't mess with stones at all yet is studying the craft would be a little silly wouldn't it?

I'll debate you on the staying fair in a tropical climate though, I was borrowing from Asian cultures in her appearance, (and I would assume not all Pernese are the brown eyed, brown haired type... given the variation in all the books.) Was also figuring that her craft is an inside gig, thus even if she would tan if she were out and about like her folks , she'd stay pretty light skinned compliments of her work environment and reclusive nature, yes?

edit add:

On second thought, maybe I should expand on her folks being fisherman, and her having other siblings heading towards/already in the smithcraft? Maybe her parents are a transitional family and they are trying to get their kids into a craft that will suit them better as a family? (Standard parents getting older and wanting their kids to be doctors bit?)

Celeanor

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Kaelyndra

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:46 pm


I've actually worked and set rocks and so forth before. Here, I would purchase my -own- expensive gems and so forth even when working under a more skilled individual.

Less expensive stones to practice on were in abundance and free for me to use, however. If she has talent, and wanted to make her own high-expense gems, I don't see why she couldn't under the guidance of her craft Master.

In theory, she could sell it at cost of gem to make back the money and continue her practice. I would imagine it's probably not too much different in a Pernese society.

I would agree with giftwrapped on the skin-tone, though. The locations genetics (so I understand) is a darker skinned type. It seems to me that she would be from a different region of Pern, and not from Ista originally. Perhaps her family, as fisherman, travelled to Ista for greater opportunity? I'm not that well educated on Pern and travel, although with Journeymen, etc, I would imagine that it's not unfeasible.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:42 am


Edit to reflect being a genetic transplant from the north. xD!

*is still debating her personality a bit* She doesn't come off as being too severe to anyone else?

Celeanor

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:06 am


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She keeps her thoughts and her feelings closely guarded, leading some to believe the rumor that she has the empathic abilities of the gems she fashions,


Quick question: It's just the way this is phrased that makes me scratch my head. I'm -assuming- you mean to say she's seen as being totally non 'empathic' or able to relate to others, and not that the stones are psychic? ((Just because it reads kind of strangely))
PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:37 am


You would be assuming correctly. xD! *edits to reword the funniness*

Celeanor

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