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 Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 9:08 pm
Exuberant Blue
Flowers in your veins,
X's on your arms
and glitter hiding in your sleeve.
Please let me be, boy, of exuberant blue,
unless you see the blue in me too.
Like a moth to light
I was drawn to you
but before your eyes
fluttered a butterfly
of exuberant blue.
Please let me, boy,
unless you see the blue in me too.
Tin birds pass your lips
and cut your tongue like
razors to your skin;
they're just as sharp.
Direct them towards me;
the pain is welcome here.
Why won't you let me be,
oh please just let me be
I said to you,
a boy of exuberant blue
Because one thing I wish I could do,
No matter if I'm red or blue,
The one thing that I'll never do,
is be the one for you.
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:40 am
I really love the detailed imagery and symbolism in here! I love the lines "Tin birds pass your lips and cut your tongue like razors to your skin". I wish I could hear the tune to this.
Great job. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:45 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:46 am
I agree with Music! The visuals you get while reading this are great! I, too, wish I could hear a melody. Maybe when we get some instrumentalists in here...xD
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The Diabeticxx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:38 pm
Vote now for your favorite song!
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