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Cerebral Perception

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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:54 pm

I wanted to share with the world
A few small facts.
As you can see, I'm a girl
I'd prefer to be called Jax

Sure, I'm not too poetic
And I'm not sure I'm sane
You can call this pathetic
It won't bring any pain

((more to come... Maybe... It's a work in progress))

Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:41 pm

jaxcam

I wanted to share with the world
A few small facts
As you can see, I'm a girl
I'd prefer to be called Jax

Sure, I'm not too poetic
And I'm not sure I'm sane
You can call this pathetic
It won't bring any pain

((more to come... Maybe... It's a work in progress))

i like your poem

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Cerebral Perception

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Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:45 pm

MzSheree

jaxcam

I wanted to share with the world
A few small facts
As you can see, I'm a girl
I'd prefer to be called Jax

Sure, I'm not too poetic
And I'm not sure I'm sane
You can call this pathetic
It won't bring any pain

((more to come... Maybe... It's a work in progress))

i like your poem

Thank you. I'm not done yet, I can't just end it there, but I'm stuck. Writer's block.

Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:29 am

jaxcam

I wanted to share with the world
A few small facts
As you can see, I'm a girl
I'd prefer to be called Jax

Sure, I'm not too poetic
And I'm not sure I'm sane
You can call this pathetic
It won't bring any pain

((more to come... Maybe... It's a work in progress))

"A few small facts"
Needs to be

A few small facts;

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