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Santinka
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:38 am

I saw a poem similar to this and wanted to expeiriment a little. It's not actually based on an event that happened to me. I just went with the flow on this one.

Heroes and Liars

If I didn't know better
I'd say you were

Lying.

You told me once that
You never lied, but were

Honest.

That's the thing I guess
About you. Two sides to every

Story.

I hoped for a fairytale
That you were a

Knight.

Shining in armor, bright
Instead you are a

Snake.

Twisted in your own lies
Your silver tongue a

Dagger.

In my heart, twisting
I hoped you were a

Hero.

But you're not even
worth the bottom of his

Shoe.

I'm walking away now
You can hear the tap of my

Footsteps.

Telling you goodbye
Because you wouldn't make an

Effort.

Kindness, you have none
You're cold as stone and

Bitter.

Why take it out on me?
I did my best to

Love.

So much for that
You couldn't at

All.

That's what I gave you
Or tried, but things went

Wrong.

Oh well, I'll be fine
It may take

Time.

Something that no one has anymore
I'm getting mine back

Today.

Fresh and cool and promising
I just wanted to tell you

Goodbye.

Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:21 am

Interesting form. How long did it take you to write?

foreveryday

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Santinka
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:10 am

Probably about half an hour.

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