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Santinka
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:21 am


Late Nights and Early Mornings

I wonder what I did
To deserve such strange conditions
For the fun and work I did
When each in our positions
Seem to do as we are bid
Muttering all contritions
For getting out of bed
And getting bad nutrition

'Cause it seems pretty bad to me
To leave behind those good dreams
In the morning just so I can flee
To another long day, it seems
That is after all, what it looks to be
Though hookie never gleams
Quite so bright as after the eve
Of sun, summer, and go-cart racing
PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:23 am


It rhymes for the most part. Were you going for a rhythm at all? It seems a little inconsistent.  

foreveryday


Santinka
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:10 pm


Hahaha spur of the moment. Just something I had been thinking about at work lol!
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