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[Q] Touched by the Flames of Serenity [wip]

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Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:28 am


Your form which returns gently to heaven
What else can I do, besides avenge you?
I watched it for the longest time, until my tears dried up.

And the sorrow overflowing from the scar which can't be erased,
I swore that I would never forget it.

I'll flap my broken wings and erase it all some day, you'll see,
Until the last bell ringing the dirge completes.

You told me to live as if you were to die tomorrow.
Fail not and be what we were now
Face as if we want to have forever

Bright red tears traced by a trembling finger,
I had nothing to lose, nothing to lose
It crashes through the dark memories.

The last smile wavered, and disappears,
And the warmth is all that's left.

Your kind and gentle words can't heal me now,
This body's only dedicated to the never ending fight.

Because everyone returns to heaven, some day,
You'll never need to say goodbye.

Break out!

I'll flap my broken wings and erase it all some day, you'll see,
Until the last bell ringing the dirge completes.

Your kind and gentle words can't heal me now,
This body's only dedicated to the never ending fight.

REDEMPTION...REDEMPTION...


Redemption by Gackt [Lyric Translation]


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Intro.


Welcome to my quest thread 'Touched by the Flames of Serenity.' This is for the shop Vishnu Ink by Aced Desire.

The goal of this concept is to get a Kirin Tattoo-Vishnu Ink child named Eoskelos.

You might be curious as to know why the thread was titled so. The reason for such is that: the kirin is a mythical beast originating from the East whose body was said to be surrounded by fire. Furthermore, sighting this creature was said to bring rui. Which in Chinese may be roughly translated into either serenity or prosperity.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:30 am


Announcements.

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2009.31.07
xxxxxxConcept thread set up.

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:32 am


Table of Contents.

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i. Intro
ii. Announcements
iii. Table of Contents
iv. Rules
v. The Inspiration
vi. The Tattoo
vii. The Child
viii. The Parent
ix. Alternatives
x. Reserved
xi. Reserved
xii.Reserved
xiii. Reserved
ix. Copyright
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:33 am


Rules.

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i. Please be respectful. Yes, I want critique, and yes, I want honesty, but I'm also human. Please critique me with respect, and if you link me to your thread, I'll gladly do the same.

ii. I know I can't claim the inspiration or tattoo, but I know I have the right to claim my own ideas; please don't steal the fruits of my brain.

iii. When you're critiquing you better do a damn good job or else don't bother posting at all. I'm not going to accept:

Oh you should change the inspiration. [lack of reason]

xxxxxxPlease note that examples like 'I don't like homosexuals' or 'all Asians are short' do not constitute as a valid reasons when giving critique. If I ever see that I'll delete your comment.

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:35 am


Inspiration.

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Gloomy Sunday by MC Sniper

On a gloomy day I continously make mistakes because of the jeaslousy from love.
As your tears burst, they wet the world coldly.
As if I've forgotten about the coming sweetness that's suffocating me,
Not even knowing the reason, I sob a hymn of a cold love.
When a typoon is sent my way so my tears can be hid by an angel's
The sky opens so that my hearts pain
can be melted all away by the moon.
I cry as the dark's melody washes over me, as if I've left a trace of a farewell.
To a love that I can't turn back to, I glady welcome seperation.

Even if that sky makes my spirit be lost in my longingness,
Already to me, it is a life test. The sky is always on my side.The sky is always on my side.
Even if behind the clouds, despair's light hides everything behind my back,
the sky is always on my side.
Not matter how much I cover and cover, our, my fate is unavoidable
and is now the choice of the power I believe in. The sky always on my side.
Listen to me so that my voice can be heard by your ears.
Even inside the sobs of my pent up anger, the sky is always on my side.

On a gloomy day with fear and loneliness I brave out the night
When my spirit that you threw away falls asleep in the darkness
My desire, which was once constantly controlled by reserve and freedom,
now expresses the love I have left inside of dispair.
As if I've left an obstacle of thought of the bruises and faults in my heart,
An unknown fragrance of solitude protects my body.
I worry about whether I should sing that song written on the paper
that my sad spirit looks for and and together they share the same tears.

The land of Seoul is not my own and I am not given a place to stand.
Through the tears of my mother I've lost my wings and I've been found.
Still the sky is on my side. Even though the wings were my pain,
Even if I loose all my dreams and hopes, still the sky is on my side.
No matter how I cry and rage they leave.
The things that I've prayed wouldn't be lost have left from my side.
With those birds whose wings don't stop I fly away.
The things that must, leave. No matter how I hold on to them they leave.

The sky is always on my side.
Even if I lose my hope of life with those stars that have lost their way
The sky is always on my side.
So that I can go to you who was taken
away by God, I sell my soul. They sky is always on my side.
The sky is always on my side.
The sky is always on my side.
Even if I lose you, I loved you. The sky is always on my side.
The stopped song and sad birds protect my silence
Because I can't go back. Still the sky is on my side.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:35 am


FIVE~

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:36 am


SIX~
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:37 am


SEVEN~

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:38 am


EIGHT~
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:39 am


NINE~

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:40 am


TEN~
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:40 am


ELEVEN~

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:43 am


TWELVE~
PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:44 am


THIRTEEN~

Komse


Komse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:45 am


FOURTEEN~
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