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Lil-Ella-Sash

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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:45 pm

Can someone help me with a summary for my story Comatose?

I've tried multiple different ones but I can't find one that works. Does anyone want to help me?

If so, here is a link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150174/1/Comatose

When I'm finished it's going to be a collection of connected descriptive paragraphs. You will not have to of seen or read the "Chronicles of Narnia" to understand whats happening.

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:23 pm

if you still want help, try reposting this in the Summary thread in the Workshop Subforum. You might get more of a response.

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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:53 am

Lil-Ella-Sash

Can someone help me with a summary for my story Comatose?

I've tried multiple different ones but I can't find one that works. Does anyone want to help me?

If so, here is a link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150174/1/Comatose

When I'm finished it's going to be a collection of connected descriptive paragraphs. You will not have to of seen or read the "Chronicles of Narnia" to understand whats happening.

Well just looking at what you have, first the "that is" should be considered to be removed.
But I personally learned nothing from that excerpt that lets me know anything about the story.
I don't think, unless the definition actually inspired you to write the fic, that you need to have it at the bottom of you page. You didn't even give credit to where you got that definition by the way.
I'd like to read on, and maybe help you find a better quote, or suggest summary information for you. The story is on Hiatus, so I'm wondering if you even want me to do this though. If yes, PM me and I will.

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