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SilentStar65
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:09 pm


Here you can write poems and stories in your spare time so enjoy and show off your creativity X3
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:38 pm



forever lost
deep in despair
when i remember
it returns
the sorrow
the emotions
of losing him
running searching
but never finding
when i think of him
my heart slowly gets swallowed
swallowed by darkness more
when i think of the goodtimes
and the bad i breakdown
i cry and sob wishing and waiting
waiting for you
whe i think of you
i fall to the darkness

It doesnt rhyme but is it good?  

punkgrl113


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:40 pm



It is as if the world has gone and a new appered,
a dark world where only people of that nature would love it,
now it is like every little breath became one big sigh,
but not a sigh of relief,never a sigh of relief, more like a sigh of deep dark horrified darkness sigh,
but now if you look there is a little overpowering light coming and the darkness better beware,
for the little light will become big and soon return peace to the world.

lol.....i had alot of poems in my computer.....tell me if you like them...  
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:42 pm



As the wind meets the air
I wonder in dispair
That one day we all may meet
Make peace
And live together
Forever.
As peace and harmony
Get together
The world slowly
Is fixed
May love and care
Peace the Earth
Together Forever.
For if no peace
The word will be destroyed
By hate
And then no air

.....is it good?

punkgrl113


SilentStar65
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:55 pm


I like the last one its pretty good and very deep
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 9:29 am


It's hard to say goodbye, but it's even harder when you never got to say hello.
Please vote and message once you've read it ('it' is in the results there genious)
Wind rushes across my face
Your hands hold my heart encased
Salty tracks run down my cheeks
I've seen this coming weeks on weeks
My heart fold in half, but no beyond repair
Still severely bruised, do you care?
Your warm brown eyes still in my head
But my heart feels nothing but dead
Your tousled hair, almost like mine
All my ears hear now is an insistent whine
I can't say your name, it hurts to much
But words come out, short and crushed
"Goodbye" one word, what does it mean?
You used to be my everything
I never got to say hello
But my regret must never show
The crack just deepened, the final blow
But of my feelings you'll never know
I'll say goodbye, but it holds no meaning
Because of my heart, that you succeeded in stealing

lol....it is long but is it any good?  

punkgrl113


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:39 pm


Do you want to listen to my quiz?
yes
no
Mean person
i love you more than you will ever know
i want to hold you ever so
you love another but i love you
i love you more than the morning dew
you stole my heart
but i have to cart
the burden of jelousy on my shoulders
this boy you love is not from here
and this fact makes me shed a tear
i long for your love and your eternal companionship
and i long for that that chance to touch lip to lip
i will give everything for your love
you should know that my beautiful dove.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:15 pm


let your soul follow the wind
let it burn with the brightist flame
so when you take the path the wind goes you can burn it in the momories of your loved ones
let the path go on until the day you die now shorter no longer
live it follow the wind the wind is your souls voice
the fire is what protects you from the winds mistakes
let your soul's wind gauid you on the right path be it good or evil

-aggroflamer-

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:18 pm


Follow your heart
Follow your soul
Trust yourself with him/her
Trust yourself with you
Follow you dreams and you will succed

-LoveLess113-
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:41 am


If there is no heart there is no life
If there is no love there is no point in life
If there is no lover there is no reason to stop looking
Keep looking and you will soon succed

-Loveless-

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 12:02 pm


I never thought i would be in so much
pain.l The pain of loss & sadness. I
reach for light i see at the top of my
deep dark hole. I i try & try to reach
the top. But, then i slip & fall & the light
goes away tell the next night. Tell then
i set in the dark, & think what could be,
if i wasnt in here. In this dake scary place
iv made for my self. Out of my sadness I
keep botteled up in my heart. I wish for someone
to help me. So i scream , scream, & scream for
help. But no won can here or see me. Im all alone
no won cares about a girl like me. So i set in the
dark just waiting for the light to come back.
 
PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:50 pm


there once was pain
but now its gone
there once was a shell
but now its cracked
there once was darkness
now a dim light
i wait on the edge
i wait for a new
i wait for you
but the question remians
will you come to save me
can you stop all that pains

Z3R013


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:17 pm


*walks in and stars reading some of the poems*
wow really good everybody, please continue! ^-^
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