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kyuuketsukidoragon

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:47 pm


Earlier today i was wondering. what if they made the same movie twice? both from the others point of view?

so then i had a glimpse of inspiration and my hands flew across the keyboard. here is the intro to The Shattered Love.

My name, is Micheal, Micheal Crowley.

My name, is Angie Connoley.

And recently I got together with the most beautiful girl in the world.

And recently I got together with the funniest guy in the world.

Angie Connoley.

Micheal Crowley.

And even more recently, I had been dumped.

And also recently, I dumped him.

I don't know what went wrong.

I was suicidal.

Everything was fine until things got a little bumpy.

I tried to O.D.

She seemed sane.

I was crazy.

Until she went back to the mental hospital.

So, I took another visit to the mental hospital.

Thats when it all began.

And thats, when it all began.

The Lonlyness

The Hate.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:51 pm


The story of my life, without the lovely relationship at the beginning.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:43 am


Intresting, even though its a little hard to understand, it was still good. Are you going to write more?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 6:26 pm


i plan on it but i just got back from maine so im going to start working on it.

kyuuketsukidoragon


kyuuketsukidoragon

PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:06 am


This story is coming out alright. here is Micheal's view of what went on the next day after the suicide attempt

I walked into drama club feeling a sense of almost,
grief? I had simply brushed the feeling off when Tom came up to me and
asked, "what the hell did you do to my sister!" (you see, Tom is Angies
sister, and istead the cliche sibling fued, they were the closest close
could be.) "I swear I don't know what's wrong!" his muscled tensed.
"Mike don't you **** with me! she was a little bit crazy up until she
dated you! but she never tried to *******' kill herself!" (I should
explain. Angie used to cut herself. and I mean all the way up her arms.
she cut whenever, wherever. even in school.) I was about get lash out
when the drama director Alec Baldwin had interupted us. "Hey guys, I
don't know what the hell you're fighting about but frankly I don't
care. Quit your aguements and get moving on that stage. (Tom and I were
both on the lowest staff. stage crew. not even tech crew, stage crew.
we were either making a set, or in town handing out flyers.) Tom let
out a grunt as shoulder bumped me as hard as possible. I brushed it off
and got to work on a painting with my friend Amanda Merril. (Amanda and
I had just met at the beggining of this year. but we were already good
friends.) "so why is Tom giving you such a hard time?" I gazed to Tom
who was lifting peices of heavy metal across stage. "He thinks I caused
Angie to try and commit suicide." she put down the brush. "what? you
made her try over dosing!?" I immediatly lashed back. "NO! I DON'T KNOW
WHY SHE TRIED TO KILL HESELF!!!" I screamed it as loud as I could. Then
I heard Tom Say "hey Mike! Catch!!" A large pipe flew across the room
and nailed me right in face. Right before I blacked out all could see
were people standing over me and Tom getting into the back of a police
car.
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