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Lilithmae

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:05 pm


Listen. The rain outside falling. Making music,so soft,as it falls against the window.
Let it soothe you,lull you,into the peaceful blackness of sleep.
Come,fall with me. Follow me into eternity.

Take my hand. I'll lead you further than the bliss of your dreams.
Come into my illusion. Don't let go. Stay with me. Come see my side.

Fields stretch out before us,filled with black orchids.
There my dreams lay;I'll show you.

Walk with me. Walk with me into the heart of my mind's wanders,of all I am.
Please,stay with me. Don't leave me. I want to share with you my fields.

Fields stretching out before us,filled with black orchids.
There my dreams lay;I'll show you.
Light withers here,only darkness survives.
And there my soul
There my soul rests.

Wind blows,ever so softly,stirring petals in the air.
My feelings there blow;within the petals.

Catch them. Feel as I feel.
Catch them. See as I see.
Catch them. Join us.

Feilds stretching out before us,filled with my black orchids.
Each one is a dream,laying there before you.
Light dies here,only darkness remains.
And within the dark,there my soul rests.

I've been waiting for you...

You will revive me. You'll make my spirit stir.
You'll open my eyes. You'll bring me back to life.

Oh,my life hath just begun. Make my dreams come true.
Answer my hopes. Save me.

Take my hand. I'll lead you further. Come with me.
Follow me. You are the answer to all my woes.

You'll stay
Within sleep
Forevermore
You'll replace me

I will be released.

My black orchids are now yours.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:43 pm


It's like he/she's being tricked by this "person" to take over something that failed them and by trapping him/her the "person" will be released from "his" oathes, failures, promises, etc... Am I right?

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Lilithmae

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:52 pm


Pretty much. The man being spoken to is being lured into a trap indeed;a trap of deathlike sleep meant for the entity speaking. I wrote this out of an idea for a short story.
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