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 Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 11:41 am
Poetry is my outlet,
..The cure to all my pain.
I write because I love
..The peace there is to gain.
Through my pen I vent
..My joys,my sorrow,my hate.
To a blank page I find
..It's easy to paint my mind.
The words my ink unto my canvas.
..My imagination the only limit.
The letters imbued with emotions so pure.
..My writing with my heart in it.
Poetry is my outlet,
..The Dark that makes me whole.
And into her I surrender
..The broken light that is my soul.
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:17 am
I just read your OTHER poem, and I randomly clicked on another and noticed that it was the same person (pure coincidence). But I like this one even better than the other (about the girl who was born into that miserable life and such). I think that the rymes in this one work together, and seem to fit together like a puzzle. It is really good! A+
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:35 pm
I like how you switch poetry stlyes as the poem progresses.
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Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:41 am
damaged-reality I just read your OTHER poem, and I randomly clicked on another and noticed that it was the same person (pure coincidence). But I like this one even better than the other (about the girl who was born into that miserable life and such). I think that the rymes in this one work together, and seem to fit together like a puzzle. It is really good! A+
I really needed this one to be special;it is meant to be what writing means to me. And as writing means an awful lot to me...
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