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 Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:08 pm
There are certain things in this world. So frightening.
Signs of a living society. I see what's expected of me.
So much I have to give up. I can't live like this anymore.
My sacrifice...
This is my suicide
I will end it all tonight
This is my suicide
I surrender all I am
This is my suicide
I will now be what you want me to be.
There are no choices left anymore. I tried.
Signs of a living society. Nothing I do is ever enough.
There's just no pleasing everyone. Is it worth denying myself?
Sacred lies...
This is my suicide
I will end it all tonight
This is my suicide
I surrender all of me
This is my suicide
My suicide...
I cannot live like this
I cannot die like this
I can't pretend this is
What I wanted to be
I will never fit in
And I just don't think it's worth it
To lie to myself anymore.
My sacrifice
My sacred lies
My suicide
This is not suicide
I will not ever end it all
This is not suicide
I won't surrender all I am
This is not suicide
This is my life!
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:24 pm
Suicide is a word you click on so;
I think with the right style it would sound great
and I especially liked the end.
"This is my life."is a scream right?
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:35 pm
I like how at the end it turns around by basically saying that it would be stupid to commit suicide....Nice Twist.
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 5:00 pm
It is a scream;thank you for pointing it out,I can't believe I put a period there instead of an exclamation mark. And I don't know what style is to your liking,but I'm pleased with the one I gave it. Wish I could record it...
This song was meant to be more of a metaphorical than literal suicide;but either way,the message is still that committing suicide is about the dumbest thing you could do. I'm glad you liked.
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