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 Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 10:41 pm
As you can tell, just by reading my name and looking at my profile, I'm a dark kinda person. *~sigh~* Yes I do cuss in a few of them *~eye roll~* Just get over it.
I will accept:
*Constructive Critcism
*Compliments
*Complaints about my writing (! TO AN EXTENT !)
*Requests for Poems or Stories.
I will not accept:
*Whining about "I don't get it!" (~ Just ask me about w/e it is ~)
*Utter destructive comments (~ Such as "This is horrible! ~)
*Complaints about how the topic or mood of anything is wrong. If it's your poem or Story I wrote for you, that's ok. But if it's MY work, just shut it -.-
Thanks for checking out my work!
In this Thread you can find the Poems:
*~Cheater~*
*~My Afterlife~*
*~All Is Fair In Love And War~*
*~Screaming~*
*~Whispers~*
*~Death~*
*~Roses~*
*~Silence~*
*~Rain~*
*~Spirit of the Wolf~*
DO NOT, I REPEAT DO NOT, COPY MY WORK WITHOUT MY CONSENT!!!!
Because me and my Chibi warriors will hunt you down :3 And make you suffer.
Application for a poem or story:
Gaia Name: So I can pm it to you!
RP Name: If it's a story ^-^ And you want to be in it
Story Or Poem?: So I know what to write
Topic: So I know what to write ABOUT!
Thanks a lot!!! ^_~
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 10:46 pm
heart *~Cheater~* heart
He runs,
But can he hide?
Maybe.
It all depends on the chaser's will.
Everything depends on the chaser's will,
How fast will he run to catch him,
How far ahead will he let his prey go?
But if the runner has more will then the chaser,
He can stop,
Turn around,
Look Death straight in the eye,
And say no….
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:55 am
heart *~My Afterlife~* heart
To fall into the sweet comfort of Death,
Would it be so hard?
No.
But to think of the broken hearts left behind in its wake,
Unbearable.
To sing with the choir of angels at the end of the tunnel...
No.
Definately not...
I have bigger plans for my afterlife,
Much bigger plans indeed.
To scare the daylights out of the living,
How joyous to me.
What fun it shall be to make them jump,
Make them scream,
Make them look behind themselves,
Paranoid.
While I laugh in their ears,
Scream to them in their sleep,
Follow them into the darkest of areas and destroy what's left of their sanity
So much fun...
But the consequence for it all....
I wonder....
heart *~All Is Fair In Love And War~* heart
Heartbeats flutter,
In tune with the world.
Schoolyard romance,
Broken hearts soon to come,
Jealousy collides with new found love,
Old lovers find a way to get back,
Typical.
Predictable.
It was going to happen.
Even they knew that,
Hurt and heartache sing a bittersweet serenade,
Love and hope break into the chrous,
Drowning out all despair and doubt,
Love on its way,
Maybe another heartbreak,
Could be,
Possibly...
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:58 pm
heart *~Screaming~* heart
The thought of that night,
Chills even the bravest hearts,
The noblest souls dare not speak of it,
All life that was wasted.
The soul that screamed 'till death,
Tortured by the pain,
Pain of loss,
Pain of bleeding,
Pain of sorrow.
That soul still screams,
Waiting for someone to end its endless night,
Waiting, hoping, watching,
Screaming
heart *~Whispers~* heart
Silent as night,
The sounds come to them.
They do not fear it,
But welcome it with open arms.
They are the people who put your nightmares to shame,
The ones who haunt the night,
They speak softly, sweetly
They torture the innocent and reward the wicked,
They come for everyone, and anyone,
But when they capture you,
They will torture you, or reward you,
And only then do you know that these horrors talk in
Whispers
heart *~Death~* heart
Is it a shadow?
Or is it a plague?
Simply set upon us to let the higher ones laugh as they watch?
No, I think it is much more simple than that
A way to refresh the world, if you will
Could it be punishment?
Could it be teh world's way of getting back?
The shadow of Death consumes all it wishes to follow it,
We are merely prey to it,
Weak and insignificant.
But those who cheat it,
And those who try its patience,
Are the ones who experience more fun.
heart *~Roses~* heart
The thorns p***k tender skin.
Flowers of red grow from the blood given to them by the bleeder.
Drip, drip.
What a waste.
'Tis a shame.
Such a nice soul the bleeder was.
Is.
No, was.
Bled to death by falling into the rose bush,paralyzed by the drop.
More roses of red grow on the shirt of the bleeder.
Poor soul.
Poor thing.
Red roses melt into black as the day grows cold and the night grows colder still.
Darkness of the night shifts into velvet black roses,
Sun-rise turns into bright, blood red roses.
Soon, we will all die by will of the rose.
For the rose is the spirit of Death that took,
Our elders......
heart *~Silence~* heart
Hanging in the air
It consumes all
Yet nothing
It is there, but hidden
Such a cowardly soul.
A Soul, is it at all?
No, this beautiful Horror, is Silence
heart *~Rain~* heart
Rain A Simple Percipitation,
But It Fits The Mood So Well.
Like The Last One To The Funeral,
It Is The Tears Of The Sky.
And Like A Stallion Of The Wilds,
Its Fury Can Be Unbearable.
But The Few It Loves, Love It Too,
And The Feeling Of The Rain.
heart *~Spirit of the Wolf~* heart
This protective animal,
This Beautiful Light of the world.
A Fury that man has never seen,
A simple Dog,
Some think.
But the Spirit of the Wolf
Is stronger than that.
It is Fury,
Kindness,
Brotherhood,
Protection,
Love,
And it is like no Other Force in the world.
The Spirit of teh Wolf is just that.
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:01 am
Oi x-x Finnally done. Now, tell me what you think. Should I switch my style?
I want YOUR personal opinion. ^^;;
I'm working on a few stories,
*~Angels of Death
*~Roses : A Bloody Remorse
*~ Validan
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 3:46 am
Random poems that don't have names yet x.x
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Explanation for the poem: This is something I wrote after my bf had dumped me. x-x It explains what hapened in those long weeks of grieving and torture. My aunt and my brother's friend's sister passed away in that same week so it was pretty hard for me. But did he care? Not. One. Bit.
Sitting alone,
Waiting for tears,
To come.
The problem:
Broken-hearted soul,
Left for dead.
Why did,
He leave her,
She is dead inside.
Cast away,
Her heart in pieces,
Waiting for tears.
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Explanation for this one: My bf dumped me after he said he'd never break my heart. Hence the "Promised love, Stripped from her by him." Surprisingly, I'm still grieving over him. We were together for 8 months o.e
Falling fast towards the ground,
Beating heart,
The only sound.
When did it start?
When will it be found?
If she really is alone, is she in heart?
Falling fast towards the ground.
Promised love,
Stripped from her by him,
And now she falls,
From his love, To hate.
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:03 am
x-x Yet another weird poem by me. I got bored and was looking at Demonic pictures and the such on the Web and a thought came to me. So here, My first rhyming poem!!! *~claps un-enthusiastic-ly~* Don't have a name yet. I was thinking "Forever Home". You'll only get the title if you read the whole thing. Eh, see what ya think.
Lost in darkness I cannot tell,
Release me from this burning hell,
Love is only but a curse,
Only redemption is the hearse.
Seeing life and loving pain
Remove me in this endless rain.
To a place where demons prowl,
There indeed, Death’s own growl
Seeing love and loving hate,
I find myself at Death’s gate.
Burning inside,
My heart abides,
To the demons’ mournful call
Summoning you to their stall
Hell hath no fury,
And through the gates you hurry,
Hoping to be removed from here,
You find this place has no cheer.
Death is all around,
And though screams are the only sound,
And seeing pain and hate and loss,
You come to meet the demons’ boss.
Taller than a tree,
He looks down on thee,
Eyes ablaze and skin red,
You stare right at his hateful head.
He watches you with eyes red and cold,
And suddenly you feel bold.
You march up to him and speak to his face,
“Demon, remove me from this hateful place!”
He laughs at you and blows you back,
And then you plan your next attack.
“Demon, Remove me from this hateful place!
I shall not stay in the presence of your face!
Remove from me whatever you want,
I shall not stay, you horrible c**t!”
He roars his laughter,
And there you stay forever after….
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:24 pm
I like them all and yes i did take the time to read them all. you should check out my story the forum is called "My story (please read and leave comments or ideas)" I don't have a name for it yet so if you have any ideas please tell me. smile
here is my info
Gaia name: Gothic Demon of Darkness
RP name: Midnight Sterling (my profile is Gothic Demon of Darkness's profile)
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 1:58 pm
My brain nearly fell half way so I stopped and read the rest the next day XD they'r really good, I don't think you should change anything =D
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:07 pm
lmao You two. xDD And Midnight, I'd be happy to include you in something, adn to read your story :3 All you have to do to get a poem or story is just tell me which one and what the topic's about ^-^
Thanks to you both :3
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