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Three Things of Four

Koeseki

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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:26 am

((Since these are short and have similar structure, I decided to put them on one thread.))

Deception

Silent evils dance like fire,
Blacker than darkness,
Brighter and sweet,
Salt breaks my desire.

Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:28 am

Hate to Comfort

Window's wake of colored brime,
The undertaker's pleasant chime,
Sour business, sweet to hold,
Great bitterness the mother old.

Koeseki

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Koeseki

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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:31 am

Isolation

Oak speaks a song, a sigh,
In loneliness, it sways the wind,
Though, in brother's shade, it does lie,
It moans of bitter sweet revenge.

Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:22 pm

They are all really, really good! Short, which is good for someone with a short attention span ((aka ME)). Great job!

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