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 Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:48 pm
Lies constantly pouring out of me
never stopping
overflowing the goodness
I thought I had.
Drowning it
in the confusion of life.
Uncertainty,
my reason for lies
Fear of confronting the consequences
wanting no one to know
of what my motive is
what causes these things to happen
Smothering myself
from telling others
choking on these words
hoping they won't
spill out
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:20 pm
A little confusing, but good all the same. I liked it.
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:48 pm
Kinda has an uneven roll sound to it
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 1:11 pm
Yeah I know it's choppy in several places. Wrote this one in a hurry; had a alot of thoughts going through my mind when i wrote it. I really don't want to edit it.. not yet anyways xp
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 2:23 pm
Oh i didn't mean it was choppy. I just badly described the rhythm.
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:07 pm
It's okay wink thank you for reading it Koeseki and Bigmouth mrgreen
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