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Koeseki

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:30 pm


Till the great fire dies,
Till the earth lays at peace,
Till heaven sings,
I will not cease,


I will not feel hate,
I will not feel fear,
I will not feel pain,
For, you are there,


Every word of rage,
Every angry stone,
I will withstand,
I am not alone,


Through rushing floods,
Through scorching fire,
Through angry mobs,
I will perspire.


I could never hoped for,
I could never dream of,
The feeling that drives me,
It must be love.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:29 am


Really good! I liked the rhyme scheme, it flowed together really well.

BigMouth12349
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:37 pm


BigMouth12349
Really good! I liked the rhyme scheme, it flowed together really well.


I fully agree!
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