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 Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 9:56 am
I look into your dark waters and see lost wishes
I see what were once the hopes
the dreams
the lives of some
I don't know who you hurt or who you helped
I don't know how many dreamed
Or how many gave up
I Don't know why people put their faith in you
You killed me
You took my dream and drownd it
You hurt so many
You don't even know your powers
It's getting dark and I have to go
You secrets draw me back as I walk away
I can't explaun why
But I will also put my dreams in your hands
Thank you wishing well
For helping
For hurting
For being something to put my hopes in
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 4:29 pm
Amazing! Takes something simple (a wishing well) and turns it into something haunting and beautiful.
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walkingcontradiction86 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:17 pm
wow that was... deep. very good ^w^
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:28 pm
Loved the structure of the poem and the feeling of evil and even the good that it brings out; that was so kool mrgreen
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