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I love you unlike a woman usually loves
eyes darting
self conscious
flirty meaningless conversations
that selfish stagnant infatuation
blushing words and aching verses
the parody of love
the plastic love

My Virgil
Your veins root me to the ground
rend my ventricles apart
open my ribs and expose me
unconsciousness sets in and you rip me to pieces
shock and shake my world apart
that schizophrenic sensation
that revelation


I am Dresden

remembering

I love you like a circuit board loves lightning
I love you like a tree loves fire
I love you like a cat loves a vacuum cleaner
I love you like Verlain loves Rimbaud

My catastrophic prophet
Shaking roman god
intellectual brute

Very nice indeed.
This is the kind of poem I would love to hear performed.

I don't know it it was just me, but it seemed very faced paced, which I enjoyed.
Nicely worded, great word placement.

Beautiful piece of work really.

live long&prosper

I don't think length is an issue is slam.

If it's short and amazing then hey, let it be short.
I love performance based poetry though. X'D


Makes my heart skip a little.
Like 50% of my poems are based on performance.

live long&prosper