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Why Bother Going On?

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DreamingRoses1224
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:27 pm


Why Bother Going On?
by: ATW

A hundred years ago the grass had been soaked with the blood of her ancestors. The sun had beat cruelly onto the sweating soldiers’ backs. But now she lay there, basking in that same sun, on the same grass with a cool wind sweeping over her. The skirts of her outfit swayed with the breeze, as did her dark, curly locks. Her calm blue eyes lay hidden beneath her long lashed eyelids and she sat in perfect complacency.
The sun now tasted sweet and happy, like a milk chocolate candy bar. It was not intense upon her pale face, but welcoming. It made her drowsy, this lazy happiness. Nothing could compare to the tranquility that she felt at this particular moment. And she wondered if this was what it was like to die, a weightless feeling, as if she were a feather drifting down to the green prairie upon its own accord. No, thought she, not even heaven can compare to this magical moment. This is what I live for.  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:39 pm


I know that feeling, the simplicity that you never want to end.  

Shallarinath
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shnarf9892

PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:44 pm


I love that feeling, and I wish that I could experience it more often than just the summertime.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 1:42 pm


Very good.

Santinka
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DreamingRoses1224
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:37 pm


I'm glad I'm not the only crazy one. Haha. Just kidding! biggrin
It's the feeling of simplicity and happiness and laziness that makes life bearable. It's the hope of Pandora's box, only better.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 2:02 am


Very Lovely

Deadman Riseing


misslovelyness

PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:33 am


It's what I hope for constantly, especially when I'm in a bad mood. I love your use of chocolate in a simile, because Milo loves chocolate. xD I have officially found a piece to read when I am in a bad mood! *bookmark* Thank you! biggrin
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:47 am


biggrin biggrin biggrin I'm glad you all like it. biggrin biggrin biggrin

DreamingRoses1224
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TrackRabbit 65

PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:05 am


Yes, that was very beautiful, ATW. i liked how you said that years ago it had been a battlefield and now it was peaceful. that was a very interesting thing to think about. i like your writng style.
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