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 Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 5:38 pm
roses are red and violets are blue
i missed my life hanging out with my old friend who are not here with me
they are special and important to me just like my family
i dont critizise of others what they said but dont critize me because u dont know anything about me i have a life
my pet dog kuma is good boy and he is funny to watch and care for and have fun with him
he is yorkie and maltse dog is really cute dog and he is chubby and sweet affection loving dog i loved alot for him as my pet to care for him
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:00 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:31 pm
this poem is really good and yeah 
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:24 pm
Hey is that even a poem ?? xD lolz
sorry sorry
um its alright
im more of a rhyming poet
u should check my stuff out in the arena, good stuff
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:31 am
it okay i tried i need help on the poem so any editing so u can fix it im not a poetic person but i need help other judge in the forum of poem is bad so i stop doing poem because of them
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:40 pm
sorry if that came out wrong lolz
all im saying, is i dont like to judge other peoples writing
because i have my own and i write them from the heart,
and i only do rhyming poems, a poem is something you write from the heart, it has meaning to the writer and hopefully to some readers...but everyone is different so everyone wont see eye to eye
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 1:50 pm
thanks for telling me that
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:33 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:03 am
it helps so i get better understand how to structure it
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 12:15 am
well i did this because i was bored of system and need something to keep me wake and yeah
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:48 am
ive had people tell me that all my poems had punctuation and grammar problems... xD
but i dont care i just like to write what i feel....
Just write to your hearts content, ^_^
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:01 pm
thanks it help and plus my number one problem is structuring it but i try to make it interesting but i have too many ideas that why it sucked
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Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:20 pm
hoping things turn out well in the poems and so on
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