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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 9:39 pm
The Story  Five Dead. Two Things in common. One Detective. One Mastermine.
There is a large city in a country named Scottsboro that is beginning to get high in crime rate, but it seems to be only one killer. The people in the crime investigating industry are getting a run in for their money with this one. As more bodies are being left for the towns people to find they look towards the police for one last length of hope. Just as the investigators are closing in on the newest victim in the "Taker" case another body shows up just like the others in an alley, after night, bitten like a snake and without blood left in their system, yet seeming perfect like a porcillen doll. The top investigator at the Crime Investigations and Security is puzzled but he refuses to give up and wants to make his city safe again. Though now he's not sure anymore what is causing this chaos in the city or how to stop it. The secret is it’s not a human killing all these poor victims it is a blood sucking, night stalking...shh Vampire
What happens when the detective gets to close to revealing the killers secrets?

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:08 pm
A Few Things To know First The human detective: Is a 27 year old male who is already at the top of the Criminal Investigations in Galos, Scottsboro. He has a dedication to his job and the citizens he serves and also refuses to let a case go cold. Now that this new threat has appeared the detective takes every second he possibly can to try and solve this murder streak. The Killer: Is on the inside as a detective but he seems ill most of the time during the day like a flu symptom. Somehow he was assigned the case although he is the new guy. He has officially killed five people. Soon it will be six. As the detective etches nearer to figuring out case after case the killer gets a little frustrated warning the detective to back off or something might happen far worse and close to home for the young man.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:36 pm
Rules....are so delightful!  1} I need the Taker. PM me your profile please. 2} Have fun and lets keep this interesting but no more than PG-16 I guess 3} We Don't really need this many rules... 
I need a new partner seeing as how my other one has passed and won't reply. I would like for a few things to stay the same for our lovely killer. The name How he is German But I ask for someone to make him more agressive and threating to the detective as the killer.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:27 pm
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:30 pm
The Detective Gaia Name: Chris Winters Name: Chris Valentine Age: 27 Orientation: Bi...or maybe he's straight...maybe he's gay Personality: Chris is usually jesting even sometimes while at work, he can be cold and sly when it is called for and he can be the nicest cop in the world if it means helping someone out or catching a killer. Outside of the office Chris is mostly carefree and laid back always joking around with friends. Life story: Chris was put up for adoption four years after birth for his parents seemed to not be fit to be called parents. His childhood consisted of being moved from one house to the other for six times till finally he found the right couple who loved him. His first foster parents started off to be normal parents taking him to preschool and interacting in his life then suddenly it began to go downhill. The boy's new parents just began to neglect the child forgetting to pick him up after school, feed him and even get him new clothes. So just two years later Chris now at age six and a half was moved into his second foster home. Now you see this couple wasn't the top of the crop from the beginning they didn't seem like the abusive type or the loopy parents but something was off. That very thing was they liked to scare children into crying and frightening them was something they where good at. At first it started off as a joke or two but lead to where Chris was rushed to the hospital one time for a panic attack at age seven. The third house was the normal family, loving mother, loving father and even a baby brother. Three years of living there at age ten disaster struck the happy family got into an accident killing both the mother and father and injuring both children severally. Then the next two houses where just bad eggs very bad. Abuse has a few different ways to show it, and Chris along with Joshua where put threw mental and physical in both houses. Chris now at age fourteen was a quiet, protective teenager who kept to himself and didn't let others in except his brother, who is now eleven. Finally the boys are moved from the retched abusive house to a lovely couple much like Joshua’s real parents. From then on Chris and Joshua lived there until they were old enough to move out. Chris graduated one year early from high school and two from college. He was only twenty when he got his Degree and then went back to college for two more years to get his Masters in Criminal Investigations and Law. Occupation: The Detective, and he works at the club on weekends as a bartender. Appearance: (ears are not gauged) Extra: He has three tattoos one on his arm, chest and neck. Arm: design of a heart going up in blue flames. Chest: rose over a bullet. Neck: The animal Bat
The Killer Gaia Name: Leasel Name: Gilbert Marsilles Age: 25 Orientation: shh it's a secret Personality:Gilbert is normally loud and cocky. He is a genius and isn't afraid to let people know it Life story: Gilbert was born in Germany. He was proclaimed a child protegee and was giving up by his family so he could study. The young man graduated college at the age of eighteen and joined the army months later. He earned his iron cross without much difficulty and wears it proudly. After being injured in a battle, Gilbert is honorably discharged, but he can't get rid of his craving for bloodshed. Finally, he begins committing murder to fuel his obsessions and thirst. After discovering that the German police are too stupid to catch him, the man heads for Scottsboro. His string of murders has continued with surprising sterility. Finding his game boring in Scottsboro as well, Gilbert joins the force trying to catch him in an attempt to make it more intersting. Occupation:serial killer Appearance: Extra: Gilbert is albino. His calling card is the image of the German Iron Cross.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:09 pm
Chris Valentine Valentine Chris looked at the clock watching it flash seven in the morning. He had been awake sense three in the morning his thoughts not able to settle. The young man sighed quietly and sat up and walked into his bathroom slipping into the shower with a sigh. "God I swear when I find this bloody killer I am going to shoot him." he growled and quickly whashed up.
The black haired man sighed quietly while grabbing a frozen pankake and heading to his car. Chris fixed his blue collar before sitting down in his '60's mustang slipping the key into the slot and easily speeding to work. Once inside he headed to the file room pulling the five reported killings in the Taken case. 
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:15 pm
Gilbert chuckled, seeing Chris enter the file room. He followed him silently, leaning against the wall. "Sleep well princess?" he asked, smiling. His crimson eyes flashed, pale skin illuminated in the fluorescent light. The albino sneezed slightly, sighing. "How long have you been up Chris? You don't look to well." he said gently.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:27 pm
Chris Valentine Valentine Chris looked up at Gilbert with a soft sigh. "No." he mumbled softly. The young man sighed quietly and sat down in a chair. "Since three." he replied before yawning quietly. He looked at the files wandering when this would all end. Chris closed his eyes and leaned his cheek onto his hand. "Are the others here yet?" he asked Gilbert before opening his blue eyes to look up at the other man. 
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