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Shallarinath
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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 8:38 am


Andrew Davis
Ms. Smith
Enriched Language Arts 10-Period 3
25, January, 2009

Inaugural Poem

The stone sits,
The bird flies,
The river sings its song,
Bought with the lives of our soldier,
This land has been hallowed by their blood,
Now its safekeeping has fallen onto us,
No longer any disputes solved at the tip of a sword,
But by all the people of the land,
Who maintain peace with sound judgment and civil tongue,
Now the ballot has been cast once more,
To chose for our land a new leader,
One who would execute the law to it’s fullest extent,
Who would seek justice for all,
And who will defend the right to freedom held by all men.  
PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 8:46 pm


Ou, very nice. I wouldn't be surprised if this was your next Inaugural poem. ;D

Teruma Mitsune
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Shallarinath
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PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:55 am


With comments like this maybe I should start actually putting effort into these things!  
PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:11 pm


Very, very nice! It brings me back to memories of a book I once read, but cannot for the life of me remember the title of that book. (I'm currently looking through my book shelf for it.) But anyways, I love your poetry! I hope to be able to read more of it soon!

Jaii Chann


Santinka
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:42 pm


I like it. Free form, right?
PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:17 pm


Yup! mrgreen  

Shallarinath
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zhilaohu

PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 9:39 pm


Great!
I really like how you write ^^
And yes you should putt effort in these, I can't imagine how they will come out if you aren't even putting effort to this !!
biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:11 pm


I like this;it's really good.

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