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 Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 3:17 pm
has anybody here written their own song? if so post it here. i'll start. this was my first written and composed song. tell me what you think
hope you like it
when I think of you -
when I think of I lose my balance
my heart beats wildly I'm feeling faint
when I think of you my vision goes blurry
the earth starts spinning I'm feeling crazed
~chorus~
and I'm falling like a shooting star
into the ocean that is your eyes
and I'm falling like a wounded bird
but if you catch me I'll be alright
I'm falling in love
when I think of you my palms get sweaty
my face is on fire I trip on thin air
when I think of you I start to hear things
I go cold all over I hallucinate
~chorus~
~ending~ (fade out)
I'm falling in love, love, loooove, fallin in love (3x)
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:22 pm
Five years ago I wrote a song for Jason. A present for our first Valentine's - I've still have never sang it for him.
I can't sing in front of other people.. even people I love. Maybe especially in front of people I love. I don't know.
Anyway.. It's supposed to be bluesy but with a rock flavor.
You're the devil. No disguise.
The truth too satisfy-ing to bother with lies.
You make colors pass before my eyes.
Sometimes it's blinding but it feels so right.
You make me want to scream like a demon.
You know you're my favorite heathen.
Wrap me up in wicked bliss.
I know I must be dreamin'
Sometimes I'm barely breathin'
Wake me with a your sweet kiss.
Of the stars and the sun..
you're the oh only one
bringing light into my life.
Scratchin' in my desire. Make me feel the fire.
Oh my vampiric valentine.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:59 pm
i love it! thats really good biggrin sorry i havent been online much. no internet out in hicktown - whoop dee doo! lol so im at a frendz usin the comp and shes correctin my grammar =/ blaaaaah!! lol but yeah thats a pretty song, and i can definitely hear it as the type of genre u said it was meant to be biggrin
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