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 Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 1:33 pm
I wrote two short oneshot stories/poem on fanfiction >_It's not yaoi or yuri but still...I hope its good. If anyone is interested, I can post up what I wrote here and hopefully get some feedback. I want to know what I can do to improve my writing so just let me know if you want to see what I read. Oh I guess I should also mention that the first fanfic is a Bleach one with Orihime and Uliquorra and the second one is Teen Titans with Raven and Malchior. Sorry if I misspelled names sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 4:13 pm
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:07 pm
Come on Fi. Let us see please
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 10:31 pm
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Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 6:28 pm
Okay... redface Sorry if I end up making it suck sweatdrop
Secretly
Your Wife
There! *Runs away and hides*
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 8:10 pm
*cries*
No matter what I try I can't get the links to work or find them.
Any idea on what I doin wrong?
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:39 pm
Hmm...thats weird confused I'll just post it up here by coping and pasting then biggrin
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:43 pm
Hello Aya here and posting my very first Teen Titans fanfic _
I hope you like it and know that this will be a short One-shot poem about Raven and her feelings for Malchior. Oh and sorry if Raven seems a little Out of Character.
*I obviously do not own ANY of the Teen Titans characters from both the comics and the TV series. They belong to Glen Murakami, David Slack, and/or The Warner Bros. Animation ^_^
Secretly
I just want to love you,
And not hate you by will,
You were the one who completed me,
Taught me I was not weird,
And as we grew closer,
My heart began to soar,
I now knew laughter,
I learned to smile some sort,
But you were too perfect,
I couldn’t keep up,
So when you betrayed me,
I finally gave up,
We fought, I screamed,
I wake from my dream,
But only to find the unchanged reality,
I should have killed you,
Burned you in that book,
But the matter of fact is…
I loved you…
And maybe…just maybe…
Secretly still do.
Please Review and let me know your honest opinions biggrin
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:46 pm
First of all, I would just like to say that this would be my first Bleach fanfic and my first fanfic in such a LONG time. I would also like to apologize to the people who story alerted and/or favorited me for my DNAngel yaoi fanfic “A DNAngel Story”. I do plan on continuing the fanfic but not without some help. But anyways, I hope you enjoy this short Ulquiorra/Orihime story. And please don’t hate me for what I write.
*Oh I also sadly do not own ANY of the Bleach characters because they belong to the genius Tite Kubo.
I stood there frozen,
But not by the cold,
My body sits there paralyze and I wish I could just go,
But here I am stuck,
As the snow blanket be’s,
And night is glowing,
With the moon at ease,
My mind it wonders,
Confuse as it is,
The emotions inside me,
They lack in understand,
You told me you loved me,
Said you found your heart,
But as I reached for your hand,
I’m left with the dark,
Days can happen,
Like the years that went by,
But I’m not moving,
I still have some time,
I’ll wait for always,
Forever I’ll stand,
My eyes constantly searching,
For those pale white hands,
No I’m not scared,
Never with you,
I’ll be brave forever,
If it means that I can stay by you,
But moments are lonely,
And I miss those cool green eyes,
And the last smile you gave me,
Right before you had died,
Ulquiorra I miss you…
Love Sincerely Your Wife,
Orihime Cifer,
The Love of Your Life.
Well that’s it. This was just a short One-shot that I came up with while doing nothing in class. Pretty much its just a story/poem thing that Orihime writes to help clear her mind of Ulquiorra and then instead turns it into a letter of some sorts to send to his grave. Please leave a review and let me know what you think ^_^
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 11:07 pm
First of all thank you very much Fi for posting them here for me -glomps-
second. I love them both. God I feel like I should say more but it all comes down to I love them.
^_^
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 6:33 pm
themadhatter91 First of all thank you very much Fi for posting them here for me -glomps- second. I love them both. God I feel like I should say more but it all comes down to I love them. ^_^ Your welcome redface *uses my hands to hide my face while looking down shyly* Thank you Nero.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 3:25 pm
Fiyori_Takeshi themadhatter91 First of all thank you very much Fi for posting them here for me -glomps- second. I love them both. God I feel like I should say more but it all comes down to I love them. ^_^ Your welcome redface *uses my hands to hide my face while looking down shyly* Thank you Nero. *smiles and pulls you into a hug* You are quite welcome.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:52 pm
Oooh
I loved them, Very poetic and such.
(Unfortantely I never got into bleach though D: )
Good job.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 6:05 pm
themadhatter91 Fiyori_Takeshi themadhatter91 First of all thank you very much Fi for posting them here for me -glomps- second. I love them both. God I feel like I should say more but it all comes down to I love them. ^_^ Your welcome redface *uses my hands to hide my face while looking down shyly* Thank you Nero. *smiles and pulls you into a hug* You are quite welcome. *laughs nervously and hugs back while still hiding my face* So...I love Tsuki she's awesome heart
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 6:07 pm
16 Prayers Oooh I loved them, Very poetic and such. (Unfortantely I never got into bleach though D: ) Good job. Thank you Prayers! It means alot to me that you think so whee I'm glad you like them redface
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