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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 6:42 pm
The point of this thread is quite simple. A prompt is posted. The first reply writes a short little blurb that works within that prompt and then the poster names a new prompt and the cycle continues.
So let's begin, shall we?
The Prompt A brief biography about one of your characters as written/spoken by that character
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Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 11:32 am
They say we never miss the sun. They say we stalk the shadows willingly. They think we revel in our malady. I will tell you, they are wrong.
I was born before the malady was discovered, twenty years to the day. My mother had been a teacher, thankfully out of work for the year. I am told the day was clear, and that my parents believed that great things would come of my birth. For them, I think, they may have been right.
My childhood years were filled with books, and games. Some time with other children, but mostly with my beloved books. Unlike most who say this, my books were not epics, though I did read a children's Illiad in my youth, they were fitting for my age. They spawned many games of make believe that took me around and all over our old home. The dark attic is where I played vampire. The basement was a cavern where I would slay mighty dragons. The yard was a battle field where I took the role of Achilles, bringing low many foes.
As I grew, and went to school, I became something of an outcast, being both the child of a teacher and such a voracious reader. My books became more mature, and my thoughts became to a more structured version to release my imaginings: the written word. I wrote much, including a journal that I page through even now. A happier time.
My middle school years were fascinating in the way my mind changed, from considering the past, and occasionally the future, to the present, and everyone around me, including, for the first time, the opposite sex. I was well read, and knew that men and women got 'together' eventually, but knew little more. But the attraction was there.
My teenage years I picked a goal, and wanted to go into the sciences. By high school I had become determined to learn as much as possible, and science seemed a good place to do it. My focus was chemistry, but I learned other sciences as well. I grew fond of a classmate, we dated, broke up. I had my friends, but I was always 'that one', the one they went to when they needed questions answered, but not when they wanted to go out for a weekend.
After high school, I joined Americorps, looking to help some people before heading to college. My parents were proud. Selfless son, off on adventures. If only I'd known then that that would be my damning mistake.
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Prompt: A character prepares for a holiday, but the action is misinterpreted.
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Man-Hungry Conversationalist
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Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 6:39 pm
Punk Fox TH T Prompt: A character prepares for a holiday, but the action is misinterpreted. "Just what the hell do you think you are doing?" I looked up just in time to see my roommate bring in the bag of clothes I'd hidden in the balcony. She stood over them with her hands on her hips, her face redder than a sunburned radish. Perhaps I should have told her before I started to pack, but it's always harder to go to Hawaii if you have jealous roommates. Therefore, I had kept it my little secret. I'd won the tickets fair and square in a draw from a local radio station. The rest of it had been easy enough to arrange. I worked in the hotel industry so I got cheap rates. The little bits of savings I had would do nicely for food and spending. I was going to Waikiki Beach and no one could stop me! "If you're moving out you could have at least had the decency to say so. EVERY other roommate has moved out without telling me. I thought you were different! I thought you were better! And here you are paying rent for a month and MOVING OUT just like them!" She was getting herself worked into a tizzy. I kept opening my mouth but there was no way to get a word in edge wise. Finally, I rolled my eyes and pulled out the tickets. I wasn't moving out. I was just going on vacation! "Shelly, calm down. I'm just going on a short vacation. I won it. I'm not moving out and I'll be back in time to pay the next round of bills." Shelly's eyes narrowed as they regarded all of me from head to toe, her arms crossed in front of her. Finally she snatched the tickets to see, and her whole demeanor changed. "...... fine..... you'd better come back though or I'm totally stealing your dvd collection" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Prompt: An interesting artifact is found in an unlikely place.
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 9:18 am
Sweet! I need to write this anyway! Practice is good. ~~
The first surprising thing we noticed was that the roof of the house was reinforced. There was no way it could have been done during the eruption, it would have taken days at that level of technology. It was almost as though someone had anticipated the events. If that were the case, though, why wouldn't they have warned the city? We have no answers at the present. We did find more questions.
In the centre of the room we found a circle of skeletons.
I don't think that was clear enough. We found the remains of twenty adults, gender yet to be determined. They were in a perfect circle, looking like they had fallen from a cross-legged sitting position. There were what looked to be ritualistic items around the room as well as other artifacts. It is as yet undetermined whether any of these are personal items that will help us to identify these people.
This is what the professor will verify. He refuses to acknowledge the strangeness of the find, called me a superstitious woman when I pointed it out. I know I am right in my questions. Most of the items found were clearly ritualistic, and yet this building was a house, not a temple. Why these people would have been in a house in the south of the city for a ritual that seems to have been ongoing through the eruption should be a curiosity at the least.
The box has deepened my suspicions. A sealed box made of stone, approximately half a meter long, thirty centimeters wide and twenty centimeters high, was found in the centre of the circle of remains. On its lid is engraved the mark of Delphi. The contents will be determined either through or after an ultrasound examination.
Further study on this subject is required.
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Prompt: It happened on a sunny day.
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 6:15 pm
I wrote for the very first prompt and didn't post it in time. Then I wasn't inspired by the others. But a seemingly optimistic setting? That sounds like the perfect stepping stone to Fleality. ninja
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It was afternoon on a midsummer day, and the weather was perfect. In the back of Burger Tyrant, I took orders, money and brief glances at the sky through the squeaky drive-thru windows.
The thought came to me from nowhere. 'I don't even like burgers.' So I tossed down my hat and told the manager I quit. He stuttered through insults, stomped his foot like a spoiled child, but I just took a box of fries and left.
The walk was nice, I suppose. When you've got nothing to do and nowhere to go except to a home and a family that will screech and scold about another lost job, then the in-between times become the best. No sense getting anywhere, really.
I appreciated at the bushy green afros of every tree, white clouds the shape of cotton swabs, and four blocks in, I spotted a rat beside a garbage can. That's the city for you. It makes them hard, so they don't fear anything.
He was scruffy, missing half an ear. Part of a donut was clutched in his forepaws, and he nibbled with nonchalance until I was right in front, staring down at him. Then he said, "Did you have a nice life?"
I stopped walking. "Excuse me?"
"Your life," he said. "It's ending soon. I wondered if it was good, is all."
"I... guess so." What else could be said to a question like that?
"Well there's a confident answer." He twitched his nose and ears. "I've had an alright life, for a rat. Lots of food, lots of fun. Almost poisoned twice, and my older brother almost bit my whole ear off, but altogether, yeah it's been swell."
It felt polite to nod. While I was doing so, a roar filled the air, like an airliner coming in too low over the city. I looked up and saw it - not a plane but something similar, tube-shaped and growing in size.
"Is that...?"
"Nuclear bomb." The rat nodded. "Sure is."
"Well I'll be da-"
It was searing heat, like when you dump the fries into the fryer and oil splashes out, but this was the whole body at once. A quick sting, the whitest light I'd ever seen, and then it was gone. Everything - gone.
So the world ended, and there we were in limbo, a void of cool and refreshing black. People floated just like they'd been on the street, but there was no street, no world.
The rat floated near my feet, looking between his paws as if the donut might have died with him.
I lifted him to my shoulder. Something about limbo made me lonely, and the grip of his paws brought comfort.
"Well, there's one good thing," he said with a wiggle of his whiskers. "At least it happened on a sunny day."
~~~ Eee... I'm bad at giving prompts. @_@
In a familiar place (where a character would have noticed construction taking place) a door suddenly exists where none was there before.
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 2:01 pm
"They put a door in. Why the hell would they put a door there?"
"Beats me. Maybe they are planning to make a hall or something outside."
"In the garden? And a hall to where?"
"Once again, I don't know. I'm speculating."
"Well, speculate harder. They aren't building anything outside, because we would have heard something about it or we would have seen them setting up. It looks like they just stuck the door in the wall and left."
"Extra fire exit, maybe? This is a pretty big area, I suppose if it filled up and there was a fire people would bottleneck pretty badly."
"I suppose, but why would they put an extra fire exit right beside the main entrance? That would be a pretty shoddy design."
"True enough. You know, I don't remember seeing a new door on the outside when I came in. Do you?"
"I came in the back way, but that's a good point. I'll go check."
"Well?"
"You're right. The door is only on this side of the wall."
"Magic door?"
"What, you mean like Narnia? As cool as that would be, we unfortunately live in the real world."
"So, I'm out of speculation. I guess there is only one way to find out."
"What are you doing?"
"Opening the door."
"Are you sure we're allowed?"
"Who cares?"
"I do! I don't want to get kicked out during my last semester!"
"Stop worrying, I'm not going to get you kicked out. Huh. Brick wall."
"What?"
"It's a plain brick wall, see?"
"So it is. Why would someone put a door to a brick wall?"
"I do not know. Absolutely no idea."
"I didn't even know this wall was made of brick."
"Neither did I."
"Wait a second, what time is it?"
"Um... Oh! It's time for us to get to class."
"Oh, God. We're going to be late! Hang on, let me grab my books."
"Hurry up!"
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Prompt: "For who can hear and feel himself forgotten?"--W.H. Auden
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:56 pm
Where the heck was everyone? Simon had been wandering around the town for an hour. It was like a ghost town. Not a sound except for the wind whistling through the streets as he wandered.
It looked as though the people had just disappeared. There were taps left running over and a small fire in one house where the stove was left on frying an egg. He had dealt with each situation as he'd come to it, searching the houses, the stores, every building he could find... all in search of the people and trying to figure out where they went and why.
Up stairs and downstairs, inside and out. The only sounds the ones he was making himself. Why had they all left him? Family, friends, neighbours. Where were they and why?
Had they just forgotten him?
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Prompt: the sun was blinding that day.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 10:58 pm
The sun was blinding, but not overly hot. It danced over the surface of the lake, and leaped into her eyes as well as blessing her with sightlessness from above. She did not blink against the pain of the light, but stared into it, trying to let it burn through her.
Every time she closed her eyes, she saw the nightmares. Even with her eyes open she could smell the smoke, taste the clinging particles of ash. If she let her mind go she could hear the screams. She couldn't tell where her own screams ended and those of others began. It was what remained of her home; the screams, the smoke, the ash. She did not want to remember, so she filled herself with the dancing light from the water.
Amazing that such beauty could still be found in nature. There was none that she could find in humanity. Amazing how there could be a quiet place that did not scream, twist or cry out at the horrors of the day. The world had ended. How could it go on?
Hours later, as the blinding sun threatened to sink below the trees, she blinked. Shadows of the light winked at her in the darkness behind her eyes, covering the images that had already burned themselves there. She finally found the strength to pull the bundle from her back and look at what she had known was there.
The bullet had entered his back, and had stopped at his ribs. There was so little left of this tiny body that had been her reason for living these many months. He had saved her life as she had tried to run in order to save his. What was she now? Mother or murderer?
She brushed the little hands and feet, smoothed the hair, tried to wipe the blood from his face, cradled him in her arms as though she were soothing him to sleep. She did not weep or keen. She could not, she could not feel anything. She was alone.
She was alone, and her son was dead.
Her son was dead, and she was not.
She was alive.
Why?
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Prompt: It was magical
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:23 am
Mahana stood, waiting for her turn, feet shuffling nervously on the reed floor of the stadium. As she looked at all the people, she marveled that there were this many in the world, let alone Hawai'i. Her Kumu Hula fussed around her, moving her pa'u skirt just so and adjusting the leis. She just kept shuffling, her feet trying to remember every step of the dance.
"You look lovely," Kumu Lil'oe smiled down at her pupil. Lovely. Right. Think lovely, graceful, smile. Mahana's tried to smile back at her Kumu. It looked more like a grimace.
Kumu Lil'oe laughed softly, her wisened eyes disappearing behind the crinkled skin. Years of laughing had done that to her. It was a beautiful effect. "You'll do fine. The point is to dance. Not to win."
That did make it better for her. Pushing a stray lock of her waist-length brown hair out of the way, she looked up at the judges seat and began to smile earnestly. Yes, to dance. To dance in the Merrie Monarch Festival at all was an honor to herself, her halau and her Kumu. She would do this.
Even with her new inner assurance she still felt her heart jump when they announced her. Blood rushing through her ears so hard she could hardly hear the start of the music, she gracefully moved on stage.
It was magical. It was as though the music took over her body. She could feel it. She barely noticed anything else, just lost in telling the story through her movements. And before she felt she'd actually been inside it, it was gone. A moment in time frozen in her thoughts, but all too soon over.
Mahana gradually awoke to the cheers of the audience ringing deafeningly through the arena. She'd done it! She'd really done it!
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Prompt: brrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiing!
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 7:30 pm
Ugh, ********, I hate that noise.
brrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiing!
All right! s**t, calm down. I’m coming! Can’t even get even get any damn sleep around here. ********? What’s up?”
This s**t better be good.
“What’s up, boy?!”
“Ain’t s**t, homie. What’chu want?”
“You tryna go down to the forty-five club tonight? I’ma get wet as a ********!”
“Again, man? We almost got thrown out that b***h last time. Dude at the door was just lookin’ to do somethin’”
“Man, I ain’t worried about him. You saw the mamis in there. So what’s up? You in or not?”
“s**t, aight. I’m down.”
“Cool. We rollin’ out at 10, then.”
“Aight,”
“Yeaaaaah! We gon' get ******** up tonight, boy!”
“See you at 10,”
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A funny thing happened on the way to work.
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:17 am
A funny thing happened on the way to work. By that I definitely mean more funny-strange than funny-humorous, just so there is no confusion.
I was in my car stalled in traffic, running just this side of late. Horns were blaring on all sides from those on the other side of late, but their impatience did nothing to alter the speed of traffic. The woman in the car to my left was doing her makeup in her rear-view mirror, talking on her cell phone, and drinking coffee. The guy on my right was brushing his teeth instead of doing makeup, but was otherwise the same deal. I could see the guy behind me singing along to the song blaring on my radio. All in all a typical morning.
I started out my day grumpy and irritated. I hadn't gotten much sleep due to the rumblings below my navel which stopped every time I gave up on rest, and began again every time I thought to give it another try. I hadn't heard the alarm, and so had missed my chance for a cup of coffee on the way out the door. It seemed to be kind of day where nothing would go right.
Then, going nowhere in rush hour traffic, another kick came from my gut and suddenly I realized that this was it. Life was no longer waiting for me somewhere around the next corner, the way it had always felt in university. I was there.
And the really strange part was that there, deprived of sleep and almost-late for work, is where I realized that life is good. I'm happy.
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Prompt: Green
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:54 pm
Everywhere one would look in the church it was green today! Green tapastries, green candles, green vesments! Green, green, green, and more green!
I was quite surpised by this, normally I pay closer attention to the Liturgical calendar, but for some reason I didn't comprehend. I opened the church bulletin and it hit my like a train. Ordinary Time has begun again! the text proclaimed in big, bold letters.
Of course! I thought to myself and rolled my eyes. Last Sunday was the Feast of Corpus Christi. Ordinary Time really meant ordinal or counted days not humdrum or anything of that nature that one usually thinks of as ordinary. In fact, as our pastor has pointed out many a time, "there is nothing ordinary about our faith in Christ Jesus!"
~_~_~ Prompt _~_~_~ An unexpected snow storm
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:07 pm
Oh, that's just great. Autumn watched the heavy, dark clouds with disfavor. She was still hours away from the campsite, and at least two days from any civilization. If anything happened, it would be at least three days before anyone missed her.
She had expected the storm to move slower, had thought that at worst she would get caught in a severe thunderstorm. She could deal with those. But no, it was just her luck to get caught outside in an August snowstorm. She was an experienced hiker, but today she wasn't exactly prepared for winter survival.
The wind whipped around her, chilling the air from the unseasonal 10 degrees to the almost unnatural freezing temperatures. Quickly Autumn threw her bag to the ground and scrambled to find her long underwear and wool sweater. Without even a hint of modesty she shed her boots and pants, wincing as the biting wind raised goosebumps on her bare legs. As quickly as she could she pulled on the long underwear, pulling her pants back on over top. Her waterproof windbreaker came off next, the turtlenecked wool sweater covered her t-shirt and the jacket was pulled back on. The first white flakes were already dancing around her, melting as they hit the ground.
As her fingers worked to retie the heavy hiking boots, Autumn considered her options. She could try to push on to the campsite. There would certainly be other hikers there, possibly evacuation assistance. However, she knew she was coming up to an especially dangerous section of the trail. With visibility already lowered and the ground growing slippery, did she dare move ahead?
Did she dare stay behind? She had enough food and water for the next three days and she could stretch that, but she was unprepared for the weather. There was no guarantee that she could find shelter, and if the weather got cooler the flimsy gloves and hood could get her into trouble. Shelter would also be a problem. There may not be enough clear ground here for even her small tent, not that the tent would necessarily provide adequate shelter anyway.
She froze in indecision as the unexpected flakes swirled thicker around her, dusting the green undergrowth with white.
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Prompt: You see your main character in a store.
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:30 am
Ugh, I hate standing in these freaking check-out lines. They’re always so long! Why doesn’t this stupid store open up some more lanes?
“Boo!”
Before I can turn around to see who decided to surprise out of nowhere, she shoves me forward, almost hard enough to bump into the old lady buying way to much cat food in front of me.
“Who the hell…?” I manage to get out before I pause and see a cute girl with shoulder length, sandy blonde hair and a pair of oversized sunglasses resting on her forehead. She waves at me with a right hand whose wrist is wrapped in a cast and when she sees the I realize who she is, a smile forms on that face peppered with light cuts and scratches. “Hellooooo” Sasha leans against the check-out belt and smirks. “Sasha, h-hey…” I answer. “What’s up? What are doing here?” “I needed to grab a few things. This place has it all, so I figured I’d stop here.” I look at the 30 pack of beer, sledgehammer, bottle of lighter fluid, sizable length of chain and the book that reads “City Map” that she has on the belt next to her. Oh god. “But then,” Sasha continued, “I’d have thought you would have already gathered what I’d be in town for.” I let out a sigh and look forward, moving up with line as old lady cat food fumbles around in her checkbook. “So who are you after?” “DesMarais,” She answered me.
I should have known as much.
“It’s getting dark and I’d like to catch him the minute he comes out of his office, I wish this god damn line would move forward.”
“And after you get him?”
“I don’t know,” She shrugged. “I may hunt down some of friends too. That’s what the map is for,”
“You could go and try to make up with Ayla,” I said to her.
“Is she still hanging around what’s-his-face? Montero?”
“Yeah,”
“Then you know I can’t do that. Every single time that a*****e and I are in the same room, we end up beating the ever loving s**t out of each other.”
“Well whose fault is that?”
“Yours!”
I deserved that. “Well, whatever you do, try not to get arrested.”
“You know I’ll just get out of it,”
I turn around and see her grinning at me when she says it.
“There are places all over this city to hide,”
Cat food lady is about to leave. I quickly move up, wanting to get away from Sasha.
“About time,” She says, moving up with the line.
“Well, whatever you decide to do: good luck, I guess.”
“Maybe, instead of hiding in some seedy motel, I’ll just come crash with you,”
“No,”
“It’ll be like an awesome sitcom,”
“No!”
“Then I’ll just swing by from time to time. I do know where you live,”
God dammit….
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Prompt: Your character moves in with you mrgreen
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