1) To show you what hard work and dedication can do when writing a good story.
2) See if you can tell the difference between who is writing what. (Which person wrote which parts)
3) Just to read a good story. ^^
I hope you enjoy!
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-CRASHED-
Written by
Kelly Harper and Roselle Hamilton
Written by
Kelly Harper and Roselle Hamilton
FADE IN
NO P.O.V – Subjective Camera
CAPTAIN is walking down the hall as calm as he can be, as soldiers from his wing scrambled around, like chickens with their heads cut off. The Captain enters through the metallic sliding doors to his office and shakily dialed numbers on his intercom.
CAPTAIN
Attention Troops of the North West Wing, will Private Zeev Hogosha report to the Confession Room immediately? I repeat, Private Zeev Hogosha, report to the Confession Room, immediately.
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NORTH WEST WING OF The Ookami Star-65* (That’s the name of the space ship.)
ZEEV was currently at Target Practice, teaching the newbie troops, and suddenly flinched at the sound of the Captain’s urgent tone.
NEWBIE SOLDIER #1
Oh-man, what in Din’s name did you do Zeev?
Oh-man, what in Din’s name did you do Zeev?
Zeev uses a stern tone of voice directly at the soldier.
ZEEV
(Growls out)
Don’t call me by my name soldier! Give me 40 push ups and the rest of you, practice using your Electro-Spears and if I don’t see you aiming correctly…well let’s just say you won’t be moving your arms for an entire century!
(Growls out)
Don’t call me by my name soldier! Give me 40 push ups and the rest of you, practice using your Electro-Spears and if I don’t see you aiming correctly…well let’s just say you won’t be moving your arms for an entire century!
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Zeev marches down the hallways directly toward the Confession Room. He knew that room was for the most elite members of the crew and he knew he wasn’t getting promoted.
CUT TO:
Zeev enters the sliding metal door, spotting the Captain staring out the window, admiring his stature.
CAPTAIN
I’ve been expecting you Zeev.
I’ve been expecting you Zeev.
Zeev walks closer to him and kneels on one knee and places his right arm across his chest.
ZEEV
You have summoned me, yes Captain?
You have summoned me, yes Captain?
CAPTAIN
Affirmative…
The Captain turned to face him, then walked slowly towards a desk and pushed a small green button. Slowly, a big screen started to come down behind him.
Affirmative…
The Captain turned to face him, then walked slowly towards a desk and pushed a small green button. Slowly, a big screen started to come down behind him.
CAPTAIN
Zeev we have a special assignment for you.
Zeev we have a special assignment for you.
Zeev was completely fascinated at the large screen, and suddenly, A picture of a sparkling lapis blue sphere appeared on screen making him jump slightly.
CAPTAIN
I’m sure you have heard of The Sphere of Eternal Life, correct?
I’m sure you have heard of The Sphere of Eternal Life, correct?
Zeev regains his composure and sits down in a small metal chair.
ZEEV
The Sphere of Eternal Life? I always thought that was merely a mythical legend among the elders.
The Sphere of Eternal Life? I always thought that was merely a mythical legend among the elders.
CAPTAIN
Well I’m sorry to say Zeev; but it’s not a legend.
Well I’m sorry to say Zeev; but it’s not a legend.
REACTION SHOT- ZEEV
ZEEV
It-It can not be. How in Din’s name can it be real? I thought it was just a story that kept the children’s imagination alive!
It-It can not be. How in Din’s name can it be real? I thought it was just a story that kept the children’s imagination alive!
The Captain sighs and sits down in a big black chair.
CAPTAIN
We have been keeping it in captivity for hundreds of years. The Sphere of Eternal Life is indeed a very powerful relic; it’s also the reason why we are out in space in the first place.
We have been keeping it in captivity for hundreds of years. The Sphere of Eternal Life is indeed a very powerful relic; it’s also the reason why we are out in space in the first place.
The Captain got out of his chair and walked towards the window, staring blankly at the stars.
CAPTAIN (CONT’D)
When you were merely a child, many continents on our home planets fought constantly for The Sphere and it’s magic to grant eternal youth. When we left our planet years ago, the elders and the counsel decided that The Sphere shall remain a secret that it shall never be seen again.
When you were merely a child, many continents on our home planets fought constantly for The Sphere and it’s magic to grant eternal youth. When we left our planet years ago, the elders and the counsel decided that The Sphere shall remain a secret that it shall never be seen again.
Zeev banged on the chair and stood up from his seat, obviously frustrated.
ZEEV
(Irritably)
Then if it’s such a big secret, why are you telling me about this?!
(Irritably)
Then if it’s such a big secret, why are you telling me about this?!
CAPTAIN
Because, just recently, a strange black space ship docked on to ours, and we were attacked by many black armored soldiers…they stole The Sphere of Eternal Life. We just figured out that the perpetrator and his crew was …Vladimir…
Because, just recently, a strange black space ship docked on to ours, and we were attacked by many black armored soldiers…they stole The Sphere of Eternal Life. We just figured out that the perpetrator and his crew was …Vladimir…
Hearing this, Zeev grew curious.
ZEEV
Who’s Vladimir?
Who’s Vladimir?
The Captain grits his teeth clutching a fist.
CAPTAIN
Vladimir; he’s a ruthless, no good psychopath. Once, he was a great over lord who ruled the land called Cygnus; until his mind was corrupted with his obsession over The Sphere of Eternal Life. He was the one who also started many wars with the other continents.
Vladimir; he’s a ruthless, no good psychopath. Once, he was a great over lord who ruled the land called Cygnus; until his mind was corrupted with his obsession over The Sphere of Eternal Life. He was the one who also started many wars with the other continents.
The Captain looks down, his face showing despair.
CAPTAIN (CONT’D)
Eventually, Cygnus was wiped out by other enemies that also fought for possession of The Sphere of Eternal Life. There was nothing left except for ruins and twisted metal. He used the metal and created a ship in dedication to his land, Cygnus-X1. Before he left the planet, he swore that when he had enough forces that he would raid our ship, steal The Sphere of Eternal Life, and take over the entire Universe.
Eventually, Cygnus was wiped out by other enemies that also fought for possession of The Sphere of Eternal Life. There was nothing left except for ruins and twisted metal. He used the metal and created a ship in dedication to his land, Cygnus-X1. Before he left the planet, he swore that when he had enough forces that he would raid our ship, steal The Sphere of Eternal Life, and take over the entire Universe.
Zeev leans against a metallic wall, his expression serious.
ZEEV
So let me guess, he finally created the army he required and stole The Sphere in secrecy.
So let me guess, he finally created the army he required and stole The Sphere in secrecy.
CAPTAIN
…Unfortunately; which is why I called you here Zeev. [/slign]
The Captain faced Zeev with his usual stiff posture
The Captain pulls out a rolled up blue schematic from his inner jacket pocket and hands it to Zeev.
The Captain smiled weakly and pats Zeev’s shoulder.
Zeev’s facial expression shows shock, but he shrugs the Captain’s hand off and bows respectfully.
Zeev Salutes.
Zeev turns and marches out the door.
The Captain stares at the door for a bit, his facial expression showing deep concern, then he turned to stare at the picture of The Sphere of Eternal Life on the large screen.
The Captain walked towards the desk and pushed the green button again, turning off the screen, causing the room to hide in darkness.
FADE OUT:
-SCENE 2-
ZEEV’S P.O.V.
ZEEV uses the SPD-09 to race quickly into space. He flew speedily around stray comets and asteroids and immediately located The Cygnus-X1 and sneakily landed on the loading dock.
Zeev jumps out of the SPD-09 and hides behind a random piece of machinery and hides quietly.
Zeev turns his head hesitantly, noticing two guards merely two feet away from him. Quickly, he ducks back behind the machinery, panting quietly.
GUARDS P.O.V.
The guards are standing leisurely about their post located in front of metallic double doors, conversing ‘quietly’.
The guard glances about, then leans in closer to the second guard.
Suddenly GALAXINA is standing in front of the guards, standing at a stiff attention with fear in their eyes their only reaction.
Galaxina gives them a cold glare.
Both guards march awkwardly away from Galaxina, who stood with a smirk on her face.
Zeev was viewing the event quietly until Galaxina turned in his direction and walked slowly passed him.
Galaxina had a smirk on her face, never noticing Zeev’s precenes behind the machinary. She then walks out two big metal double doors and leaves the scene.
Zeev sighs heavily behind the machinary as he watched Galaxina leave the room.
Zeev turns his head towards the doors Galaxina left through.
Zeev looked left and right to make sure the coast was clear, and raced quickly into the slowly closing doors. He saw Galaxina turn down a corner and followed her distantly.
Galaxina was close to her destination, never noticing Zeev stalking from behind her in the distance. She entered the room immediately yelling at the guards who were suppose to guard The Sphere of Eternal Life.
Zeev peeked from behind a corner, staring at the door that had The Sphere of Eternal Life.
Zeev’s stared at the ceiling and saw a fire sprinkler, then he turned his head to his left pocket.
Zeev pulled out a pack of laser matches and pulled one from the box.
Zeev then lit the match and threw in at the sprinkler, causing it to get stuck. Suddenly a large siren went off and seconds after it went off, so did the sprinklers.
A group of wet guards went scrambling out the room and down the halls Galaxina running out, wet as well and madder then ever.
Galaxina looked at the guards continuously run around.
Zeev watched Galaxina leave the hallway, leaving it empty. He then ran into the room quickly, the door shutting behind him.
Zeev is now in a white room, sprinklers going off in there as well, his eyes spotting a glowing sapphire sphere. He walks towards it.
Zeev reaches out and takes the sphere off the pedestal causing another siren to go off yelling “intruder alert” over and over again.
Zeev runs out the door the sprinklers still running.
Galaxina is in the hall, screaming orders to the scrambling and stumbling Gerudo soldiers. She turns and sees Zeev, who skids to a stop.
Galaxina suddenly grabs one of the soldiers and points at Zeev.
The soldiers start to shoot lasers at Zeev. Zeev ducks behind one of the machines, hiding from the line of fire.
Zeev peeks around the corner, then quickly hides again as they try and shoot him.
Zeev runs out from his hiding place and, dodging the lasers, manages to get into a closing room. Galaxina runs over to the closed door and pushes a bright red button, sending Zeev into the vacuum of space.
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If you're a Zelda fan, you'll notice a lot of things relate back to it. That was Kelly, my friends', idea. She said it was bored and wanted it to be done, so it was thus. *shrugs* Just so you can differentiate the styles of writing, I have the more descriptive writing. Now, this is only 15 pages out of the whole 73. I hope you like it, and I hope you guys comment! ^^ Thanks!
P.S. By the way, If you've noticed the format, that is the format needed for this style of writing. (It was NOT easy!) So...yeah. ^^ Enjoy!
-Mizu Rose
…Unfortunately; which is why I called you here Zeev. [/slign]
The Captain faced Zeev with his usual stiff posture
CAPTAIN (CONT’D)
I want you, since you are the only one on the force that has the strength of a true Hylian Warrior, to sneak onto the Cygnus-X1 and steal back The Sphere of Eternal Life.
I want you, since you are the only one on the force that has the strength of a true Hylian Warrior, to sneak onto the Cygnus-X1 and steal back The Sphere of Eternal Life.
ZEEV
*bows*
I accept this mission, Sir.
*bows*
I accept this mission, Sir.
CAPTAIN
I knew I could count on you. We have the SPD-09 set up for you at the loading dock.
I knew I could count on you. We have the SPD-09 set up for you at the loading dock.
The Captain pulls out a rolled up blue schematic from his inner jacket pocket and hands it to Zeev.
CAPTAIN (CONT’D)
I took the liberty of swipping a map of the entire ship. There are guards spread out all over the place, so be careful.
I took the liberty of swipping a map of the entire ship. There are guards spread out all over the place, so be careful.
ZEEV
Right, do you wish for me to bring it back to the ship?
Right, do you wish for me to bring it back to the ship?
CAPTAIN
No! If you bring it back, then there’s a strong possibility of them making an attack and stealing it from us again, AND destroying our ship…
No! If you bring it back, then there’s a strong possibility of them making an attack and stealing it from us again, AND destroying our ship…
The Captain smiled weakly and pats Zeev’s shoulder.
CAPTAIN
I am entrusting The Sphere of Eternal Life in your hands Admiral Zeev Hogosha.
I am entrusting The Sphere of Eternal Life in your hands Admiral Zeev Hogosha.
Zeev’s facial expression shows shock, but he shrugs the Captain’s hand off and bows respectfully.
ZEEV
I-I am honored that you have entrusted me with this privilege.
I-I am honored that you have entrusted me with this privilege.
CAPTAIN
We’re all counting on you Zeev. Now, move out!
We’re all counting on you Zeev. Now, move out!
Zeev Salutes.
ZEEV
Sir, yes sir!
Sir, yes sir!
Zeev turns and marches out the door.
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The Captain stares at the door for a bit, his facial expression showing deep concern, then he turned to stare at the picture of The Sphere of Eternal Life on the large screen.
CAPTAIN
(Whispers)
In the name of the Sacred Realm, I wish you much luck...Zeev Hogosha.
(Whispers)
In the name of the Sacred Realm, I wish you much luck...Zeev Hogosha.
The Captain walked towards the desk and pushed the green button again, turning off the screen, causing the room to hide in darkness.
FADE OUT:
-SCENE 2-
FADE IN:
ZEEV’S P.O.V.
ZEEV uses the SPD-09 to race quickly into space. He flew speedily around stray comets and asteroids and immediately located The Cygnus-X1 and sneakily landed on the loading dock.
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Zeev jumps out of the SPD-09 and hides behind a random piece of machinery and hides quietly.
ZEEV (THOUGHTS)
Ok I am now boarded on the Cygnus-X1...
Ok I am now boarded on the Cygnus-X1...
Zeev turns his head hesitantly, noticing two guards merely two feet away from him. Quickly, he ducks back behind the machinery, panting quietly.
ZEEV (THOUGHTS CONT’D)
How in Farore am I gonna get past all of these guards?!
How in Farore am I gonna get past all of these guards?!
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GUARDS P.O.V.
The guards are standing leisurely about their post located in front of metallic double doors, conversing ‘quietly’.
GUARD #1
Hey, I just got back from Lord Vladimir’s Court. She was there again!
Hey, I just got back from Lord Vladimir’s Court. She was there again!
GUARD #2
(Annoyed)
Who, Galaxina? She’s our Lord’s Right-hand man! Sheesh even an octorok would know that faster than you...
(Annoyed)
Who, Galaxina? She’s our Lord’s Right-hand man! Sheesh even an octorok would know that faster than you...
GUARD #1
Shut your trap! I knew that! But, she seemed to be acting...strange. towards our Lord.
Shut your trap! I knew that! But, she seemed to be acting...strange. towards our Lord.
GUARD #2
(Raises an eyebrow out of curiousity)
Strange? How so?
(Raises an eyebrow out of curiousity)
Strange? How so?
The guard glances about, then leans in closer to the second guard.
GUARD #1
(Whispers)
Well you see, I was going to ask Lord Vladimir why The Gerudo Soldiers were-
(Whispers)
Well you see, I was going to ask Lord Vladimir why The Gerudo Soldiers were-
GUARD #2
(ASTONISHED)
You were going to ask him that?! What’s wrong with you!?
(ASTONISHED)
You were going to ask him that?! What’s wrong with you!?
GUARD #1
(Irritated)
Will you shut your trap?! That’s not the point!
(Irritated)
Will you shut your trap?! That’s not the point!
GUARD#2
(Shocked)
Sheesh, calm down...continue on.
(Shocked)
Sheesh, calm down...continue on.
GUARD# 1
Well when I was heading down Lord Vladimir’s Corridor, I noticed they were together.
Well when I was heading down Lord Vladimir’s Corridor, I noticed they were together.
GUARD#2
(Rolls eyes)
Well obviously. They were probably discussing new orders for the new troops.
(Rolls eyes)
Well obviously. They were probably discussing new orders for the new troops.
GUARD#1
But, her face was red!
But, her face was red!
GUARD#2
(Surprised)
Come again?
(Surprised)
Come again?
GUARD#1
(Lowers voice even more)
I’m telling you! You know how her skin is usually light purple? Well...it seemed...darker, somehow...
(Lowers voice even more)
I’m telling you! You know how her skin is usually light purple? Well...it seemed...darker, somehow...
GUARD#2
Where are you getting at with this?
Where are you getting at with this?
GUARD#1
(Insisting)
Well, I think that maybe her and Lord Vladimir are-
(Insisting)
Well, I think that maybe her and Lord Vladimir are-
Suddenly GALAXINA is standing in front of the guards, standing at a stiff attention with fear in their eyes their only reaction.
Galaxina gives them a cold glare.
GALAXINA
I don’t remember Lord Vladimir ordering his troops to stand lazily off guard, coversing about things that truthfully don’t matter. Get back to your posts…or else.
I don’t remember Lord Vladimir ordering his troops to stand lazily off guard, coversing about things that truthfully don’t matter. Get back to your posts…or else.
BOTH GUARDS
R-Right away ma’am!
R-Right away ma’am!
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Both guards march awkwardly away from Galaxina, who stood with a smirk on her face.
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Zeev was viewing the event quietly until Galaxina turned in his direction and walked slowly passed him.
ZEEV (Thoughts)
Oh no! Please don’t see me…please don’t see me!
Oh no! Please don’t see me…please don’t see me!
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Galaxina had a smirk on her face, never noticing Zeev’s precenes behind the machinary. She then walks out two big metal double doors and leaves the scene.
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Zeev sighs heavily behind the machinary as he watched Galaxina leave the room.
ZEEV
(Mumbling)
Phew that was too close for comfort…Hey wait a minute.
(Mumbling)
Phew that was too close for comfort…Hey wait a minute.
Zeev turns his head towards the doors Galaxina left through.
ZEEV CONT’D
Aren’t those the same doors I just passed? If…she’s Vladimir’s Right-Hand man, then maybe she knows the location of The Sphere of Eternal Life.
Aren’t those the same doors I just passed? If…she’s Vladimir’s Right-Hand man, then maybe she knows the location of The Sphere of Eternal Life.
CUT TO:
Zeev looked left and right to make sure the coast was clear, and raced quickly into the slowly closing doors. He saw Galaxina turn down a corner and followed her distantly.
CUT TO:
Galaxina was close to her destination, never noticing Zeev stalking from behind her in the distance. She entered the room immediately yelling at the guards who were suppose to guard The Sphere of Eternal Life.
CUT TO:
Zeev peeked from behind a corner, staring at the door that had The Sphere of Eternal Life.
ZEEV
(Thoughts)
Oh Farore that’s just great…that room looks heavily guarded. What am I gonna do now?!
(Thoughts)
Oh Farore that’s just great…that room looks heavily guarded. What am I gonna do now?!
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Zeev’s stared at the ceiling and saw a fire sprinkler, then he turned his head to his left pocket.
ZEEV CONT’D
Hey I just got an idea! I guess the rookie troops did rub off on me.
Hey I just got an idea! I guess the rookie troops did rub off on me.
Zeev pulled out a pack of laser matches and pulled one from the box.
ZEEV
(Mumbling)
The elders always lectured us about playing with fire when we were rookies…well today I play with fire.
(Mumbling)
The elders always lectured us about playing with fire when we were rookies…well today I play with fire.
Zeev then lit the match and threw in at the sprinkler, causing it to get stuck. Suddenly a large siren went off and seconds after it went off, so did the sprinklers.
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A group of wet guards went scrambling out the room and down the halls Galaxina running out, wet as well and madder then ever.
GALAXINA
Don’t just run around you buffoons, turn off the damn system!
Don’t just run around you buffoons, turn off the damn system!
Galaxina looked at the guards continuously run around.
GALAXINA
When I find the nimrod that turned that thing on….
When I find the nimrod that turned that thing on….
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Zeev watched Galaxina leave the hallway, leaving it empty. He then ran into the room quickly, the door shutting behind him.
CUT TO:
Zeev is now in a white room, sprinklers going off in there as well, his eyes spotting a glowing sapphire sphere. He walks towards it.
ZEEV
The Sphere of Eternal Life. This crystal has caused nothing but trouble and fell into the hands of evil. Now I’m taking it away…
The Sphere of Eternal Life. This crystal has caused nothing but trouble and fell into the hands of evil. Now I’m taking it away…
Zeev reaches out and takes the sphere off the pedestal causing another siren to go off yelling “intruder alert” over and over again.
ZEEV
Well…time to go!
Well…time to go!
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Zeev runs out the door the sprinklers still running.
ZEEV
(thinking)
Drat! How in Din’s name am I supposed to remember the way to get out of here!
(thinking)
Drat! How in Din’s name am I supposed to remember the way to get out of here!
Galaxina is in the hall, screaming orders to the scrambling and stumbling Gerudo soldiers. She turns and sees Zeev, who skids to a stop.
GALAXINA
(roars)
You!
(roars)
You!
Galaxina suddenly grabs one of the soldiers and points at Zeev.
GALAXINA (Cont.)
What are you doing, you fool!? Attack! He’s an intruder!
What are you doing, you fool!? Attack! He’s an intruder!
SOLDIER # 1
(disoriented)
Y-yes ma’am!
(disoriented)
Y-yes ma’am!
The soldiers start to shoot lasers at Zeev. Zeev ducks behind one of the machines, hiding from the line of fire.
ZEEV
(Thinking)
Crap! How am I supposed to get out of here now?!
(Thinking)
Crap! How am I supposed to get out of here now?!
Zeev peeks around the corner, then quickly hides again as they try and shoot him.
ZEEV (Cont.)
I think I saw an opening, but it’s cutting it a bit close. I’m not sure if I’ll make it, but it’s worth it!
I think I saw an opening, but it’s cutting it a bit close. I’m not sure if I’ll make it, but it’s worth it!
Zeev runs out from his hiding place and, dodging the lasers, manages to get into a closing room. Galaxina runs over to the closed door and pushes a bright red button, sending Zeev into the vacuum of space.
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If you're a Zelda fan, you'll notice a lot of things relate back to it. That was Kelly, my friends', idea. She said it was bored and wanted it to be done, so it was thus. *shrugs* Just so you can differentiate the styles of writing, I have the more descriptive writing. Now, this is only 15 pages out of the whole 73. I hope you like it, and I hope you guys comment! ^^ Thanks!
P.S. By the way, If you've noticed the format, that is the format needed for this style of writing. (It was NOT easy!) So...yeah. ^^ Enjoy!
-Mizu Rose
