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kyuuketsukidoragon

PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 7:32 pm


A blur.
Purple, Blue, Red, Green, Yellow.
The pattern repeats itself again and again.
All that is visible.
Cant think of what to do.
Whats this feeling its quite new.
Cant think where i've been.
A girl, beautiful and sleek.
Yyet something inside her that seems.
Different.
A noise is heard everyone screems.
Purple, Blue, Yellow, Orange, Red...
Red....
Red....
Whats going on?
Where am I?
Someone tell me!
Darkness.
Light.
Darkness.
Light.
A doctor?
What happened to me?
What did I do to myself?
Eternal Darkness.
Finnaly, Peace.

It could have been better but its 10:30 and im tired but i felt like making a quick poem for you guys. keep rockin.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:05 pm


Pretty good, but a little confusing... but hey, it's late...

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