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Hatomi the Lolita Vampire
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 Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:21 pm
well this is a story i wrote out of boredom during class and my friends at school fell in love with it so i guess i wanted to share it with you guys....and well if you could tell me your truthfull opinion even if it sounds mean....
"You know Re-be-kah i haven't felt any sort of attachment to you. And you promised me that you would make me fall for you", came the mocking voice of Lyric, as he gazed out the window in deep thought. "I know I promised and I've fallen for you so much that sometimes when i'm near you i'm sure you can hear my heart beat....if....if someone-". "Enough! so what if you have fallen fr me?! The point is I haven't! The only reason why I started going out with you is because you said, you would for sure make me love you. And from what I hear you always keep your promises". Lyric sighed and shrugged his shoulders. "I guess this is one promise you couldn't keep....well I have no need for you anymore, you may leave." said Lyric as he made a gesture with his hand as shooing her away. Rebekah made her hnds into fists. She was shaking violently until finally she took a big gulp of air and glared at Lyrics back. "Your....Your so Cold Hearted! I gave you everything I could give you!.....". She let her tears fall, and she gulped, "..........just tell me, did everything that we did make you feel anything?". Lyric sighed and turned his head to look at her. "No.....nothing we did meant anything to me. When you laughed I wanted to leave, when you talked I wanted you to shut up.....when you cried I wanted to laug at you so bad at how pathetic you looked". He looked at her hard, "Every time when i think of the time i spent with you i regret it.....i can't believe i wasted so much time. oh well no one can go in the past and fix things". Lyric turned so he could be facing the window. "P....Please" whispered Rebekah. Lyric turned his full body to her, "hmm?". "Please tell me that night meant something to you", came the broken whisper of Rebekah as she fell to her knees. Lyric stayed quiet, he knew what night she was talking about. The nightwhen she went against everything she believed in just for him. He started getting images of that night. He stopped when he heard a whimper. He saw Rebekah get up and look at him directly in the eyes. "Didnt you hear me? I said........DID THAT NIGHT MEAN ANYTHING TO YOU?!?" "I'm not going to lie to you......yes it meant i would stoop so low to feel something for real.....and not only that, didn't you feel anything? to not keep up with all your priorities, heh you broke the only rule you had for yourself. And for what? Nothing.....you knew we were coming to an end, and as your last resort you used your sexual appeal to be with me a little longer.....And after that you still get dumped. You know i only called you here to tell you that we were over and now i had to give you the whole reason. Normally i would tell you to leave, but today i don't feel like dealing with the questions of "Why'd you break up with her?!!" and such so......later". With that said Lyric left the room leaving a sobbing Rebekah on the floor. "Harsh much?" Said Mark, the jock of the school, but more importantly known as Lyrics' best friend. "She made it complicated, wanting an explination" Said Lyric as he looked at the floor. "Besides you said you liked her"
"Well....yeah I did until i found out she liked you.....After that I guess any thought of her liking me went away". Said Mark as he shrugged. "So who's your new target now?" "....., I think i'll take an artistic girl this time. I would pick a scholars girl again, bt look at how ended with Rebekah. I think i'll take it easy, with an artistic girl for now." Lyric turned the opposite of Mark and started walking away.
"Heh.....damn b*****d! so cocky and arrogant." Muttered Mark under his breath as he saw Lyrics' back dissappear...........
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:24 am
awww its so much like school sam XD but i like it...i wanna know what happens to lyric...DOES HE DIE FOR BEING A DAMN IDIOT!!?!?!?!!?!?! he should....
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sakuravampire_aqua Captain
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Demon_Princess_Ariko Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:53 am
Awesome Jackie! Lyric sounds like my type of guy too! XD I wanna be the girl he falls in love with! But I doubt it will happen...
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Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:22 pm
lol i would kill him for being such an a** ^.^
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sakuravampire_aqua Captain
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Demon_Princess_Ariko Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:33 pm
Lol I would but he sounds like my kinda guy so I don't know anymore. XD
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 7:33 pm
"RAYNE!!! Get Back Here!!! yelled a girl in a high school uniform with her golden locks pulled up in a high ponytail and her blue eyes blazing. "Oh God. Oh God. Oh God! today i'm for sure gonna die!", exclaimed another girl with medium long scarlett hair. "RAYNE! I see you!", exclaimed the blonde. Rayne ran as fast as her medium legs let her. She entered a classroom labeled "chemistry 101".
Rayne searched frantically for a certain person or persons. She spotted a familiar red bow. "Cecilia! help me, please! exclaimed Rayne as she ran toward two girls who were talking. Cecilia turned her head to see Rayne runing to her, "what do you want?" said Cecilia. "Please! hide me!" Said Rayne, panic showing in her green eyes. Cecilia deeply sighed, "from who?". Rayne gulped, "from-" Rayne was interrupted when the girl from before barged in. Rayne got behind Cecilia and whispered, "her".
Cecilia sighed once again, "Aisha what did Rayne do this time?". Aisha pointed a manicured finger at Rayne. "She stole my Homework!". Cecilia turned to look at Rayne.
"Rayne....you didn't do your work?",
"w...well you see....I didn't get what to do" said Rayne as she pushed both her index fingers together.
Cecilia gritted her teeth, "so.you.kept.me.up.until.2.in.the.damn.morning.for.nothing?!"
"well you see, you were explaining it to me but in half way I started getting sleepy and well...started dozing off....I'm sorry" said Rayne as she put her head down in shame. "B.....But atleast you got an early work out, right Aisha?" said Rayne as she tried to break the tense atmosphere. Aisha sighed and looked at Rayne. "Rayne, you didn't do your work, and now you have to pay the consequences".
Rayne pouted and made the cutest puppy dog eyes she could make. Cecilia gave in first, "Aisha just let her copy your work, I promise you she won't do it again" Aisha looked at Rayne, than at Cecilia, than back at Rayne. "Sorry Rayne but you have to learn to be responsible." with that said Aisha went to sit in her assigned seat......
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Hatomi the Lolita Vampire
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Demon_Princess_Ariko Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:50 pm
I am so Rayne. XD Cecilia is Jackie. XD
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Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 4:37 am
im aisha without the preppy look XD i love being overdramatic and that was over the top ^.^ but it was good 3nodding
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sakuravampire_aqua Captain
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 9:36 pm
Yep. Your story is awesome Jackie! Write more! XD
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:32 pm
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sakuravampire_aqua Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 9:24 pm
We command you to write more! ^-^ "evil laughter"
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:49 am
she's not writing more.....waaaa!!!!!!!! *cries* its been like two months.....O.o....
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sakuravampire_aqua Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:44 am
"cries in little corner" I'mma go emo because of you Jackie! "cries"
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:24 pm
(......... stare i don't want to held responsible for the reason of someone going emo....so here ya go, sorry i didnt post before i kind of lost my little notebook thingy so yeah....i found it yesterday when i was cleaning my room =D)
In Geometry
"Rayne do you have your homework?" asked the patient voice of the Geometry teacher. It stayed quiet for some time. "RAYNE! I know your in class, so now tell me, where's your homework!" Rayne stood up from her seat and started scratching the back of her head. "Well...you see sir....I HAD my homework with me than....umm...", she looked at her English book and found the words "Petticue are awesome". "Petticue!.....uhh, what i mean is my....friend went to get a petticue and I went with her so she wouldn't be lonely, than the lady of the shop offered me one for being such a good friend and I being nice accepted the offer!", she said grinning like a fool. "And than an unexplained wind came and blew away my homework. I ran after it as fast as I could, and I caught it. But since I had the.....umm petticue stuff on my fingers the paper ended up slipping away and-"
"Enough!" Exclaimed the teacher.
"B.....but sir! I didn't get to the part where the dog got traumatized for seeing Aisha with no make up!" exclaimed Rayne.
In the background you could see Aisha giving death looks at Rayne, and Cecilia slap her forhead with her hand, muttering the word "Idiot". "Rayne I don't know what I find more outstanding. You not doing your homework yet again, or the fact that you actually thought i would buy your ridiculous story!....Rayne you have detention for the next two weeks."
"Wha?!......NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Sir Please! anything but detention!" yelled Rayne.
"Umm Sir" started Cecilia. "How about you lend her to the third floors' teachers. The teachers up there always need help, and they could teach Rayne a lesson or two....." Cecilia saw the teachers skeptical look and added quickly, "Plus they have zero tolerance for tardiness, disruption, loudness, and no work done." The teacher sighed and nodded, "very well...Rayne you lucky I'm letting you off so easily."
He got a paper and wrote some stuff down, you could see Cecilia smirking and Rayne looking incredulously as the teacher gave her a piece of paper. "Here, just give it to the counselor upstairs and she'll give you a list of the classes you need to go and help at." With that said, he let her go out of the classroom.
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Hatomi the Lolita Vampire
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:39 pm
Uh oh. Rayne's in trouble! Yay! You wrote more! "hugs Jackie"
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