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What do you guys want me to write?
  boarding school
  medievl (cant spell it XD)
  vampy
  nowadays with kings and whatnot
  just school with problems (BOOOORING!!!!!) no picky this one XD
  another world with different species (never did one before actually)
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sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:35 am


ok i will not start writing a story until you guys tell me what you want to read....oh and if you want it nowadays or the past. though my past things will suck horribly ^.^ another world might be better ^.^
PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 12:01 am


Vampyre story!!! ^-^

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sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 12:02 pm


^.^ um so you want the vamp one or the other one? it'll confuse me if i do both at the same time....and the vamp may suck a little because i didnt really get very far into that story XD but tell me how you want the main part of it and ill do my best ^^
PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 6:53 pm


Ah! I don't know. The main one! ^-^

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sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:19 pm


O.o?......i guess ill do my vampire story..... XP since you have confused me horribly XD hopefully it isnt that hard to understand ^.^ its my first time writing in first person POV....i want to try writing like that though, so tell me how im doing ^.^

I'm currently running through the town of Slithe. Guards are chasing me.
How wonderful.
Oh, I'm sorry. I'm being very stupid right now.
My name is Kris Pethor. I'm a girl of the age of sixteen with brunette hair that reaches my butt. My bangs are cut to my shoulder and usually to one side. My currently grey eyes are looking around me at this moment to be sure I won't be caught again.
Right now I'm in a wedding dress. And I know what your thinking. "She's only sixteen. How can she get married?"
Well, I'm being forced to.
Daddy and Momma don't know where I am at this moment.
Daddy AKA King Lucas and Momma AKA Queen Isabella are worried sick probably.
You know, I think I'm confusing you. I'll start from where things started going wrong.
So as you probably already know, I'm Princess Kristal, but I like Kris better. Everyone in our kindom even calls me that.
Getting back on track, I was outside one day helping our gardener, Sarah, with some flowers. She's an elderly woman in her fifties.
As she had gone around to the fountain to fill her watering can someone had crossed the castle grounds. I never noticed until it was too late. They had already grabbed me and held my mouth. So you see the problem there obviously. A princess is being kidnapped where she can't make any noise. But I'm not one of those proncesses who are fragile. I'm not too strong, but I can hold my ground well enough. So I kneed the guy in his crotch.
He didn't like that one bit. All of a sudden some friends of his were right next to him. Somehow he still had hold over my mouth, so I was out of luck. I couldn't yell for help. So anyway, that guy's friends all came and tied me up. You know the usual kidnapping without anyone noticing.
Then Sarah came into view and saw them.
She screamed for help. I still love her for that, but nobody has ever found me yet. Oh how I miss them all.
So after she yelled there was a big commotion with guards. Right when they were in sight, the men took me and disappeared...well at least to my eyes they did. I had passed out pretty much. When I woke up, it didn't feel like I had slept very long. I'm not sure where we had gone since they had something over my eyes. I was held there for a year, which means I had been kidnapped at fifteen. Then the king, who is cruel, of this kingdom ordered that I marry him.
That is so gross. He's probably fourty or something.
So yeah, during the wedding ceremony I decided to take off. And that brings us to where we are now.
Actually since I had talking to you for a while, I'm now hiding in an alley as the guards passed.
Now let's describe my dress.
If it would have been a wedding I did for myself I would have loved this dress. It was a long white strapless dress. What I find disturbing about it is that the top, where it covers my boobs, actually looks kind of like wings. I'm not sure if you can imagine that or not. It would allow more cleavage to be seen. As you can guess, the old fart of a king, had chosen the dress...it's kind of disturbing that he wants to see my chest since he's so much older than I am.
Oh no, they saw me.
Time to take off down the streets of this town again.
So now I'm running down the streets again, with everyone watching as I run by.
Guys drooling, gross, and girls jelous, why I don't know. I'm running from the freaking palace guards.
Old couples are pretty much wondering why I'm running probably. If they only knew.
I jumped over a loose tile that would have tripped me. Holding this dress and running is kind of hard actually.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:16 pm


Sugoi! Sugoi! What happens next?

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sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:06 pm


Oh great, how will I avoid those people comming up?
There is a group of about four people walking at the cross roads. None of them notice me comming full speed at them. How dumb are they?
Now one of them is looking this way.
"Guys I think we're in trouble," a short haired blond guy said. The others look at him.
"Why do you say that?" a girl asks. She looks a little bit like another guys with her. She has black hair that reaches her shoulders, while the guy has short black hair.
The fourth person is another guy. He has brown hair that reaches his ears. Kinda cute. Sadly all of them are too far away for me to see their eyes clearly. That's so evil.
Oh yeah, it would be nice if I would pay attention.
"Look over there," the blong haired guy said pointing at me. "A hot girl is running this way." Oh great just what I need at a time like this.
The girl slapped him. "She's in trouble so let's help her."
"But Isis!" The girl disappeared from human eyes, but not from mine. She was running toward me.
The guy who looked like her just stood there with his idiot friend, while that cute guy came with the girl, Isis.
"Come on." Isis was now right next to me.
"I can't. If they see how fast I can run, they'll get the palace vampires to hunt me and any other vampires down. I will not risk anybody's life like that."
"It's okay. We're not very worried." She looked to my other side where the guy was running. "Isn't that right Tai?"
"Yep." We passed up their friends, who are now following us.
"Go down that next corner and hide behind the dumpster," Isis ordered.
I did what she said and they all followed me. Disappearing once they were in the alley.
Once all the guards passed Isis and Tai appeared again.
"Quickly run down the alley and once you hit the dead end jump onto the roof," Isis orderd again.
Again I did what she said.
Once I was on the roof I saw all of them.
"Okay, first introductions," Isis said. "I'm Isis and that guy that looks like me is my twin, Osiris. And before you say anything. Those were myths. We didn't get married cause that would be gross."
That made me giggle a little.
"I'm Tai," he introduced while kissing my hand. Hmm... not a bad catch.
"I'm Jason," the blonde one said winking at me.
"Jason behave," Isis said, hitting his shoulder.
They seem like they would be great friends.

sorry...i ran out of time....it will be longer hopefuly next time.....not sure...
PostPosted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 4:28 pm


o.o that is so cool!!!!!!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:49 am


Awesome!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:48 pm


"I'm Kristal, Kris for short," I said.
"Okay, now that we know this hot girl, can I have her?" Jason asked me.
"No Jason," Isis said, hitting him yet again.
Tai grabbed my hand pulling me with him.
"Let's go everyone. They'll find us soon." He looked at me. "Use your speed and stay with us. We'll get you away from them."
"Can you get me back to Emerald Palace?" I asked.
"Isn't that the next kingdom over?" Isis asked, running with us. Jason and Osiris were behind us.
"Yes. I'm the princess there."
"Oh, I've heard of you," she said. "Princess Kris. The kind princess of our country."
"Yeah, that's me," I said smiling.
"Weren't you kidnapped last year?" Osiris asked.
"Yes I was."
"And your in a hot wedding dress why?" Jason asked.
"Because the king of this kingdom was forcing me to marry him."
"Stop right there!" We all turned our heads to see the palace vampires behind us."
"Damn!" Tai said. "Everyone, go faster."
"No, just get away from me," I said. "They'll leave you alone." I let go of Tai's hand and jumped back into the street where the palace guards were waiting for me. I ran through the streets again, with all of them after me.
"Get back here!" the lead guard said. He was a vampire. I stopped in front of a fountain, being surrounded in the town square. Guards and townspeople alike were there. I jumped onto the sidings to the top of the fountain. There was a thin point at the top of the fountain that didn't spray out water, and that's where I was balancing, on both feet, with my dress covering my feet. To everyone watching, it would look like I didn't even have feet. "Get down here!" the lead guard shouted again.
"No," I said. "I will not go back. Not after being kidnapped, starved, and forced to marry your stupid king." The crowd of townspeople gasped.

sorry...i ran out of time....

sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 9:38 pm


Sugoi! Kris is awesome!
PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 1:12 pm


O.O what happens next? the king gets shot? hopefully! and kris is so awesome!!! =3

Hatomi the Lolita Vampire


sakuravampire_aqua
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:00 pm


(sorry for the reeeeeeeallllllly long wait. oh and silver affects vampires now too. watching true blood has its perks ^.^ and i think you two need to watch it as well. besides the sex, its a very good show, almost like twilight, but more grownup.)
"Don't lie about our king like that," one of the guards shouted.
"Why would I lie about that b*****d? How would you feel, being stuck in some cell for almost a year?"
"Would our king really do that?" an old man asked. The woman next to him was looking at me.
"Would he do that to an innocent little girl?"
"He would," I answered. "Why else would I be running around in a wedding dress this revealing through town?"
"Hey doesn't she look familiar?" another guy asked.
Damn. They can't reconize me. I'm screwed if I am, theni'll have to take off and hide or something.
"You've probably seen me a couple of time before I was kidnapped. I use to walk through towns."
One of the guards held up a gun.
"Stop lying about our king!"
"I am not lying about that b*****d!"
One moment I'm standing there on the top of the fountain. The next, well, I'm falling backwards where they'll probably let me drown.
"Kris!" Hmm...That sounded like Tai.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I don't know what happened, but all I know was that I was in the darkness, with voices around me.
"Who shoots someone without proof?" Isis shouted.
"We should bring in other kings on this matter," Osiris stated. "I'm sure that they woud love hearing about how the palace guards of Slithe shoot people without any proof. Espically that kind king. What's his name?"
"Ooh!" Jason shouted. "Isn't it King Lucas?"
"Yeah, I heard that he had a guard killed for hitting a child," Tai added.
"He loves kids," Isis chimed in again. It sounded teasing in a way.
I moved a little and tried to open my eyes, but the pain in my chest hurt too much.
"Crap!" I muttered. I heard some noise then felt someone's hands on my wrists.
"You are very lucky that she's still alive." Tai's voice sounded so much closer. "If that bullet had pierced her heart, we'd kill you personally, then bring you to the other kings, especially King Lucas." I felt someone picking up my body.
"Now we'll be leaving," Isis told them. "And we'll leave the townspeople to deal with what you did." I felt the body start moving, probably walking. there were other murmers and I could tell that other people were getting mad.
"Just hold on a little longer," Tai whispered to me. "We'll get that bullet out after we set up camp. And I know it hurts, but you'll have to hold on until then."
"It's made of silver, we'll have to get it out soon Tai," Osiris stated.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 9:26 pm


Nuuu! She can't die!

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Ragauna107

PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 6:50 pm


ehm... im here to support your story in hoping that youll support me as by being your boyfriend ^^
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