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Good Evening Writers,
I am in the process of developing a Science Fiction story. I have been developing some of the facts about the Solar System in which this story takes place in, and perhaps expanding it to further Star Systems, depending on how well I enjoy writing Sci-Fi.
I want your honest opinions on how well functioning this Star System would be..

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Star Data
Type F3 V Yellow-white Main Sequence
Radius 9.04 x 105 km (1.30 x sol)
Mass 3.37 x 1030 kg (1.69 x sol)
Temperature 6900 K
Luminosity 2.23 x 1027 W (5.83 x sol)
I
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 6.04 x 107 km (0.40 AU)
Period 1.72 x 103 hours (0.20 earth years)
Gravity 16.49 m/s2 (1.69 x earth)
II
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 9.99 x 107 km (0.67 AU)
Period 3.66 x 103 hours (0.42 earth years)
Gravity 3.10 m/s2 (0.32 x earth)
Special 3 small moons, advanced alien artifact
III
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 1.38 x 108 km (0.92 AU)
Period 5.96 x 103 hours (0.68 earth years)
Gravity 11.07 m/s2 (1.13 x earth)
Special Electromagnetic storms, large moon
IV
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 2.22 x 108 km (1.48 AU)
Period 1.21 x 104 hours (1.39 earth years)
Gravity 6.12 m/s2 (0.63 x earth)
Special Wreckage of a crashed starship
V
Type Terrestrial World
Orbital Radius 3.73 x 108 km (2.49 AU)
Period 2.64 x 104 hours (3.02 earth years)
Physics Small iron/silicate
Hydrosphere 0 % water, 14 % ice
Atmosphere Thin reducing
Special Electromagnetic storms
VI
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 6.74 x 108 km (4.50 AU)
Period 6.41 x 104 hours (7.34 earth years)
Gravity 12.23 m/s2 (1.25 x earth)
VII
Type Rock Planet
Orbital Radius 1.34 x 109 km (8.96 AU)
Period 1.80 x 105 hours (20.61 earth years)
Gravity 8.27 m/s2 (0.85 x earth)
Special Advanced alien artifact, electromagnetic storms
Distant Companion
Type G3 V Yellow Main Sequence
Distance 4.05 x 109 km (27.06 AU)
Radius 8.01 x 105 km (1.15 x sol)
Mass 2.51 x 1030 kg (1.26 x sol)
Temperature 5600 K
Luminosity 4.69 x 1026 W (1.22 x sol)

I will be naming the planets later.

I agree. The numbers and technical terms don't make all that much sense to me. I lean more towards fantasy rather than hardcore science fiction, so I never thought much beyond basics for creating worlds. Although Irrelae does have two moons and a red star as a sun...

A quick glance over the planets, though, and my first inclination is to say that there's too many rock-based planets in there. From what I remember in astronomy, a good portion of planets in solar systems are gas giants, some up to (and even over) twice the size of Jupiter. Now, the planets themselves might not be able to support life as we know it, but it's commonly believed that the moons would.