|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 8:47 pm
Name:Gage Haku
Lines:
500 (gifted)
327 (training)
25 (missions)
325 (AoR)
1100-(spent)=73 left to use......
Chakra:
2000
Titans:
Demons/Clan Abilities/Marks:
One-Handed Hand Signs
Those of Haku's Clan are able to make hand signs with only one of their hands.
Haryuu Mouko - Destruction Dragon Fierce Tiger (Rank C)
Hyouton • Haryuu Mouko is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, an ice tiger will rise from the surrounding ice to strike out against its target. Its cold nature can freeze any nearby water, and its large mass can cause a large amount of damage when it impacts.
Rouga Nadare no Jutsu - Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique (Rank C)
Hyouton • Rouga Nadare is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, an avalanche of snow will rain down towards Rouga's opponent. As the snow slides down, it will coalesce into large snow wolves. These wolves can follow Rouga's bidding and attack his opponent. A sufficiently powerful straight thrust can disrupt the wolves and return them to snow.
Sensatsu Suishō - A Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death or A Thousand Needles of Death (Rank B)
This jutsu freezes water into the shape of sharp needles, which then home in on the opponent from all directions. To perform this Jutsu, the user must be near a body of water. Haku is able to perform this jutsu with one-handed hand seals.
Hyourou no Jutsu - Ice Prison Technique (Rank B)
Hyourou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Snow ninja Kakuyoku Fubuki. After forming the needed handseals, Fubuki will touch the ground, causing columns of ice to rise from the ground at her foe. If caught, the ice will rise up around her target and imprison them. She can also use this technique as a defensive measure, raising the ice to form a shield against incoming attacks.
Itsukaku Hakuegei - One Horned White Whale (Rank B)
Hyouton • Itsukaku Hakuegei is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, a gigantic horned white whale made of ice will rise from the surrounding snow to come thundering down on an opponent, crushing them and the surrounding area under its large mass.
Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu - Black Dragon Blizzard (Rank B)
Hyouton • Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, Dotou will thrust his arm to send out a black ether-like dragon to strike his opponent. As it flies through the air it will begin to turn, when it hits the target it will use its motion to launch the opponent high into the air.
Souryuu Boufuusetsu - Twin Dragon Blizzard (Rank A)
Hyouton • Souryuu Boufuusetsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, Dotou will thrust his arms to send out twin black ether-like dragons to strike his opponent. As they flies through the air they will begin to turn, creating a large dark tornado.
Makyō Hyōshō - Demonic Mirror Ice Crystals (Rank A)
This jutsu uses nearby water to become ice mirrors that completely surround the opponent. These mirrors can't be easily broken or melted because they can be harder than steel. The user can travel instantaneously between these mirrors and attack while in transit, making it nearly impossible to fend off the user's attacks or attack the user. Once inside one of these mirrors, the rest of the world appears to be in slow motion, making it very capable for the user to have an easier advantage over their opponent.
Missions:
S:
A:
B:
C:
D:1
Stats:
Nin:100
Tai:0
Gen:0
Area: A clearing in the forest outside the mist hidden by an already thick coat. Here your accuracy is truly tested, as is the rest of your vision.
JUTSUS:
E RANK:
D RANK:
Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.
Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique
Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Rain ninja Kagari which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.
Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.
Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance
C RANK:
Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Yahiko will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
B RANK:
Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.
Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Doryou Dango - Mausoleum Earth Dumpling
Doton • Doryou Dango is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flattening all in its path.
Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile
Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.
Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.
Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River
Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.
Doton Kekai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison
Doton Kekai • Dorou Doumu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth and cause it to rise up around his opponents. Placing his hands against the dome he is able to suck out the chakra from the people trapped inside and bring it into his own body. At the same time Jiroubou will use his own chakra to spread throughout the dome, this allows him to repair any damage his opponents manage to inflict on the inside. The chakra is not evenly spread out though, as the chakra flows away from Jiroubou, it becomes more and more weak. Allowing the dome to be broken on the far side if hit by a hard enough force.
Iwa Yado Kuzushi - Stone Lodging Destruction
Doton • Iwa Yado Kuzushi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
Ningu Kekkai • Gykakuuroko no Jin - Ninja Weapons Barrier • Reverse Fish Scales Formation
Ningu Kekkai • Gykakuuroko no Jin is a Ninjutsu technique used by Shitenshounin. Devised to counter Gaara's sand, the formation draws upon their weapons which focus their chakra. Arranged in a triangle with Gaara at the center, the three Shitenshounin members will use three underground waterways to connect their formation. These waterways converge under their target. With their weapons charged with their chakra they will activate the jutsu, sending a surge of power through the waterways to the central target. This will cause a dragon of water to rise from the ground and envelop Gaara. This water will soak Gaara's sand and make it become much heavier. This causes it to clump and makes it near impossible to utilize.
Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.
Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.
Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.
A RANK:
Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent
Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Yamato will generate water to use against his opponent. This technique was seen in conjunction with Naruto's Wind Element Rasengan. These two attacks combined together to form Gufuu Suika, a large rotating water and wind vortex.
Note: Can be used in collaboration. The real jutsu summons water.
Jukai Koutan - Birth of Dense Woodland
Mokuton Hijutsu ~ Jukai Koutan is a Ninjutsu technique unique to the First Hokage which uses the Wood Element. The First Hokage does the necessary hand seals and a dense growth of forest and branches grows from the ground to entangle his target
Note: You need a wood chakra element. See chakra combinations.
Kai – Release
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell. Note: Affects only rank C and below Genjutsu
Pain's Chakra Detecting Rain (Unnamed) This unnamed Ninjutsu technique allows Pain to blanket a wide area with a downpour of rain. He can maintain a connection to the rain and tell when someone is obstructing it. This also allows him to detect the individual's chakra level and skill.
Satetsu Shigure - Iron Sand Autumnal Showers
Satetsu Shigure is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Sandaime Kazekage. Using his body's special ability to change his chakra into a magnetic field, Sandaime Kazekage could form the sand into small piercing clumps which could rain down on his opponent. Because of the deadliness of the attack, a ninja must do all they can to avoid it, rather than make any attempt to block it.
Shichuurou no Jutsu - Four Pillar Prison Technique
Mokuton • Shichuurou no Jutsu is a unique Ninjutsu technique used by Yamato. Using his ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, Yamato will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. These beams will converge and combine to form a prison. In essence the technique allows Yamato to conjure a prison from nothing, and not even have to summon it.
Suishuu Gorugon - Water Attack Strong Current Torrential Rain
Suiton • Suishuu Gorugon is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a mass of water. This can then be sent towards his target as a biting serpent.
Suitenhoufutsu - Sky and Water Convergence
Suiton • Suitenhoufutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes water to rise from the ground and surround the target. Ruiga can then use this water to drown his target or as a medium to call forth his fish summons. Because Ruiga uses groundwater to create the jutsu, if he is in a rocky area, he will have difficulty utilizing this technique.
Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water. Yamato used this technique in conjunction with Earth Style Doryuu Jouheki. This allowed him to form a large waterfall.
Note: This jutsu only creates the large amount of water.
Yomi Numa - Swamp of the Underworld
Doton • Yomi Numa is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Sannin Jiraiya utilizing the Earth element. After forming the needed handseals, a vast swamp can appear beneath his target to sink and kill it.
S- RANK:
Suika no Jutsu - Hydration Technique
Suika no Jutsu is a secret Ninjutsu technique used by Mist ninja Suigetsu. This jutsu allows Suigetsu to totally transform his body into water. Maintaining this form requires that he keep constantly hydrated. In this form he can also draw upon and control nearby water by immersing himself amongst the liquid. [200% Base Cost, 40% per turn afterwards.]
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 8:49 pm
(02/ 09/ 09)
Mace was meditating on his grounds. He had been previously sharpening Kunai, but now, he had more then his bag would hold. Realizing this, he stood up. He picked one kunai out of the bag. He looked at a target sheet he had placed on a nearby post. Having had his eyes shut longer then necesary, his vision was indeed blurred. this was something he may need to be able to do. He had to be able to hit his mark at all times. Drawing that Kunai out he held it trying to aim."Damn....." He said looking at it. ths was a job of course that still was a struggle. He then flailed his arm throwing the Kunai. He hoped it would hit its spot. the bladed loop went stright and true. However, its target was the Center and it was gliding to the side. the wayside was its destination. there was no hope of hitting that center as he wished. the kunai tip wasnt even focused right. It ended up hitting the wall and chipping out a piece of the target. what a dissapointment that was. He did try hard however, and so that same driving effort is what was going to get him into the ultimate power he craved. Looking at the taret he saw no change. His eyes were still blurred afterall. He then reached down into the bag taking a second one. He flipped it into the right position. He clenched his teeth this time. He was angry at the target. this target was mocking him. He could feel its laughter at his pain. He was humiliated by an object before him. He would not stand for such unfavorable things as that. He clenched his opposite hand focusing. "Come on Mace...." He said. "You arent Vincent...." His mind argued. "Because of this, yu will not suceed" the voice in him continued. He became furious. Taking aim, hethrew the Kunai, hitting his target, however cracking it as well. He had brutally damaged the target itself in his anger. He looked angrily into the still foggy looks of his trining area. He then took his right arm and wiped his eyes. As the clearing became visible, he was proud of his accomplishment. As proud as he was, he knew he would need a new target soon. Now he had a purpose though.This could take physical training and expertise. He had to be strong to take out a tree and make targets afterall. He had broken all of his other ones out of anger as well. His temper would indeed be the death of him. He sighed heavily looking up at the crackling wood. He began to laugh, before running over. "Dammit....well at least I hit my mark." He said before beginning to look at the wood tallying up the damage. this might have his vital nerves if thrown at the back. that was indeed an improvement. Last time, he only would have stung them well. this time he may have broken something. He was well glad with this idea. However this circle wasnt done yet. It would still hold up a bit longer. this was just a thought that he should get ready for fetching a new one.
He then began to run back. He broke into a sprint. the area nearby whiled past him as he ran. this was indeed the easy part. Getting this whole area in survey, he stopped. He then went into his bag, taking out some stars. they were dull and listless. He began to polish them. they needed to be at top performance in order to fit right. He had to have the best of format to have the best throw. this here was more then he had ever thought of being able to do though. He was just glad to be a ninja. However he had high expectations for himself. as a result, his stars must be perfect too. He took out his sharpening stick, and began work. Back and forth, once or twice he went. He smiled as light sparks lept off the blade from the friction. the flashed amused him. As the blade began to sharpen he ficused on detail. He looked at the stars now trying to get them even at the tip. He then began to drag them off of the sides of the tip. He wanted the edges to cut before sinking. He wanted the enemy to remember his blades. His craftmanshi was amazing. Preparing for battle wat a task itself, which was ok for him. He planned to kill the mist swordsmen and take the village maybe one day. Afterall he had to cover reason to do it. they were the ones that put Vincent on the mission. Not that he cared, but it was his lie for now. Secondly, they never knew savagery like he did. those guys would know savagery at the end of Maces blade though. He would get his own special sword and show them that being skilled didnt mean that they were the best. He would defeat the pompus ones along with innocents. they all could die. It didnt matter. their lives were nothing more then the time between one kill and another. this meant great things were waiting on him for this indeed. Testing one, he threw it at the wood. It whizzed into the bottom end having no real pinpint target. The blades were good enough to use now. this was all he needed for today. His first day in seclusion was a sucess. He began to stand up and run back to his sleeping area to rest off a bit of his time in here.(66)
(02/10/ 09)
Vincent woke up in his bed. He had officially been here a whole day. This wouldnt be too bad. He just had to train a bit more then average. By the tie he got back, he would be ready for the exams completely. this was the second day of his Kaguya Venture. He would do this as all Kaguyas did. Stay one month period training alone. He had to do this or they wouldnt let him progress in rank. As a result he had to do this.
He would start with push ups. In order to trow he must be strong. the throwing used mainly upper body. not to mention the fact that punches needed strength as back-up. He looked at the ground. It was quite dirty. He hated a dirty floor ruining his clothes. And so he began to shed most of his clothes. his armor fell as he unfastened his shirt. But then he saw something. there was a small hole in the wall. Two little beedy eyes were looking at him as a result. He smiled. He enjoyed witnessing the wildlife. Wildlife was one of the few things that brought him peace mentally. however this animal was angry. It shirped and hissed at him in its hole. When he approached it , the creature showed teeth. And so he played fake fear, and ran from the hole. the animal followed. the hole itself was large and it turns out there was indeed a racoon in his Cave. Mace didnt like those. He grabbed a kunai from his smaller puch and threw it, making it stick in front of the animal. The animal hissed jumping bac before coming around after him again. He knew he had missed his mark. He had merely tried to ward the creature, however now it was time for it to die. the creatures end is eminant. As it hooked around for him, he threw a second blade sinking it into the creature. It yelped hissing and flopping. the creature looked with anger as he stared it down. This was a male. It had apparently been trying to attracf females by show of strength. Now that it was dead, the females fled. He smirked knowing at least he didnt break a family in half. Maybe he saved some life the pan of being in a shadow. This was the resolve he had to kill other things. To spare their children the strife of another pain. Being in the shado of someone else. No matter how hard you fight you are behind. You continue losing. This was the bad part of being Mace. He had a deluded philosophy no one would change soon. This period out in the woods would only add his savagery. This would fuel his anger. He was passionate for hatred. The darkness of wrath was his seventh sin. He consumed this thoufht into his own fury. His anger would consume the world. He walked to the creature, drawing back his blade before kicking the corpse to the side. This would be his victory. He was satisfied. Taking his kunai to a water spot in the cave, he dipped it. The water clensed his blade. It was as though it hadnt been used. This made his sin clean and his body pure again. The death wasnt on him or his weapon anymore. Mentally he had wiped he death from his mind. The creature was that insignificant. He was the one in power in this cave. Satisfied with that release of anger he began to go back to his area of meditation. He thought to himself focusing Chakra for a while.
His meditation showed his fury. He thought back to childhood letting his anger build his energy. He remembered the first time that he was practicing. His brother tried critiquing him. He looked at the lids of his eyes in anger remembering this happening. The images of his brother.....always so nice. this was horrible. This thing that made his brother so great, made Mace so wrong. His strength increased. He felt his fury. Consumed in mental pain his chakra was visible around him. He wasnt trying to be. why didnt Vincent be normal? Why did he become a swordmen before him? Why was he such an object to be put as comparison? Why did his parents force Vincents jobs onto him as His brother went on into glory forever? Why was he the one left to sink into misery? this wasnt what he needed to be a part of. he wanted to escape. He had to get out. This was a pain he couldn escape. this anger and dissapointment stirred the monster within him. He was no exile to anyone but his own glory. This wasnt something a Kaguya should be. This was what a Kaguya needed to destroy. Should he destroy himself? Was this truly how he was supposed to live? did they expect him to really put so much effort into.....honor? this was a circling thought now. He had misery for a halo, and his brothers story as binding chains. He was furious now. No one here would understand it. However his chakra was burning fast now as he lit up. He needed to rest. He was straining himself now. He had to look at the wall opening his eyes to lose focus. Falling back he began to breathe. In through the nose, out through the mouth. His respiration returned to him. He was tired now. this was dissapointing him. He was supposed to be stronger. Why wasnt he stronger? WHY?!?! Puching the ground he continued to rest for now.
Time had passed. The second day was well under way. He drew his stick marking another line next to the first on his wall. He had been insulted by being tested on febuary. They wanted him to get home soon. They didnt believe in him. He growled before agreeing with his stomach. Now he needed to eat. He stood up. He had to get a fire going outside. He left the cave in a jog. Looking over to the side, he saw his fire pit. It was going out. He needed flint, wood, and a starter. He looked to the woods. The night had gone without rain so the grounds were dry. That meant that there were ripe dry sticks for the picking up. He went out into the woods. He then looked around. in the woods. He saw a few sticks. He ran to get them, but stopped. He wondered why the birds werent chirping. Maybe his chakra flex ran them off from before. Maybe his savagery granted him solitude.It didnt matter. He then stood up looking at the world.
He grabbed the sticks, moving back to his hut, cave....thing. Finding the fire pit he picked up his flint and began to spark the stones. he had to get them burning to a crisp so he could cook. It took three strikes to get it going. That meant he was doing better then yesterdays five. Walking to the lake while the fire built he looked around. He then saw something. Taking his Kunai, he threw it. The water splashed. Not a change in the world. He did lose a Kunai though. "damn...." He swore. He then took a second look, before throwing a second Kunai. It sunk and he dropped his head. This wasnt working. He swore once more before looking again. Blood was rising up in the water. Running over he ollowed the trail, reaching for his prize. He caught a decent prize. A short task. However it would be easy to a mist ninja. They lived in the water afterall. He smiled lining the fish and beginning to cook it. This was nice indeed. He would be satisfied for now with his food. (93)
02/11/09
Vincent was up early today. The fish had filled him up and he fell asleep fast. He was currently trying to find a way to run on the wall. If he could do so then he would overcome his enemies. The suprise his agility would provide was great. He tried to first run up the wall and see how long he lasted. He ran up. 1....2....3....THONK! He only lasted three seconds!. That was horrible. He had to try again. He ran again. 1....2.....3....4....5. He didnt fall this time. He was experimenting wit chakra flows in his feet. He had to master it in order to wall run. He then crouched down on one knee. Then beginning he took with a sprint. He was feeling pumped up about it. with a jump sideways he tried to catch the wall. One foot slid off of it and he was on the ground. He kept going, moving closer. He jumped again, but didnt have enough room. Landing on the ground he tried to move a lttle bit futher away. With a diagonal cut he was on it. He began further up. He had to keep moving. He felt as though it were like riding a bike. He had to keep pushing to make it all move. "Come on!" He said as he started slipping. He was drawing near the fighting dummy. this was his primary target. He slid a little bit before jumping to his dummy. He threw a Kunai and missed, and was in a direct target range. the average would have blocked up, leving their torso exposed. Thats when he would have came in and cut the gut. Driving in he hit the stomach of the dummy with the kunai folded out on a point.
Knocking the dummy over he hit the ground hard. He then left the kunai in getting up and off the dummy. He was proud of himself. Although he hadnt went that far, it was a start. He had to meditate on it more. He had to find the most effective way to attack. He had to learn a way to handle those who use Taijutsu. Genjutsu was a problem as well. However he went one at a time with things. He was determined to take out his opposition with a mass overhaul in chakra ower and technique perfection. He wouldnt be Vincent. He wouldnt Die. He would survive, Drawing his Kunai out of the dummy he began to humm to himself. He began to jog back to his weapon area. He looked at all of his utencils. He had already an ample amount. However he had to be ready at all times. He wondered if their was a way to mass produce weapons. He couldnt have an assembly line......Well he could if he had clones. He might have to work on a good clone technique.
He began lacing his index fingers with a couple of kunais, spinning them in his hands respectively. He was going to see how precise they were. He would throw them and see how long they were true. If he was able to hit a distance then they needed little work. He looked at the exit of the cave. flipping his Kunai, he thre it towards the exit. it began wving a little before reaching it. He then ran over to get it before looking back to the inside. He threw it once again trying to make it back where he was before. He was going back and forth. He felt his am get tired, so he switched. As a ninja, being ambidextrious is a need. If you couldnt, then you had a weak spot. Weak spots werent good in this line of work. He had to be able to throw farther, with his left. It was obviously his flaw. If he couldnt throw, he couldnt block. If he couldnt block, he could ge hurt. If he could get hurt, he could die. If he could die...then he would be like Vincent. This hatred was aggrivating. However it was his drive. The ammunition to fight. His caged anger. He then used this to start trying push ups. good old fashioned hard earned push ups. His chest was getting too flat. He needed some buffer in his figure. He had to strengthen out. Maybe then he would be able to make the Kunai go farther.
He then looked at his hands. He focused chakra into his bones. looking down, he punched. the ground dented a little. Vincent could always drive deeper. He got angry and focused more. Another punch. Deeper that time. "One more" He said before punching again. The ground was developing a small hand crater. He wasnt focused on his bruising tissue because he couldnt feel his hands. The bones were strengthened. That was all he needed in this workout. The skin would recover. He then took one more punch, making a crack in the dry earth. "Nice" He said looking at the crack. It was then that he stopped focusing the chakra, and his nerves responded. "Agh!" He said before shaking his hands. "I need to work better then this" He said. (62)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:21 pm
Mace looked out from his area. It was raining today. This would be a day of meditation. He had to reflect. What was his resolve? Had he no reason to fight? Was he nothing more bu a shell of a man? Or was he merely a murderer? He hadnt killed yet,but he was ready to. a murderer is bad by intentions, more then actions. Had he no intention, he would not kill. And this is the logic he had. So on he was with this mentality. Why would he not go out in the rain? He could act just as well out there as in here. However, he just wasnt a rain fan. Odd for a mist ninja indeed. He didnt care, however. This would be his spot. This would be his main area to focus his energy. He wanted to focus his chakra into him mind. He though to hiself that it would allow him to use more of his brain. The average human used about ten percent. If he would strengthen his brain, then he would learn faster. He might be able to learn anything at a higher speed. A high powered mind is the ultimate tool. a necessity to say the least. However what was there to do on his training grounds? To be even the most literate of a story would be puzzled with this. there was no plot in developement. No reason to be here. just an open space to train. Doing whatever he needed to get better. However in being limitless he was quite limited. He was limited to possibilities. What on earth could he do here? None of it made sense. And as a result he was bored. Meditation sucked. He had nothing to be accomplished here, yet he had to work. working with no purpose in sight did nothing but kill drive. this angered him. "Why am I here?" He yelled to himself. He took a rock throwing it out into the rain. It hit smething. there was motion out there. It made him stand to look. Something had shifted. It wasnt an animal, but a small fragment formation. He went over to see what it was. He held a kunai in one hand ready to fight. However he didnt truly think he would need it. HE was only trying to take a safety precaution. This was a waste. It was prbably nothing. However if it was, then he would regret not having looked at this before now. And so he had to search. Hopefully he might find reason and truth. "Hello?" He called. No response. Maybe it was jsut a squirrel? Man, this was wierd. it had moved from the ground to the right. This meant that it would need power to move that far. What possibly could have moved it? He didnt throw the rock that hard. He knew that wasnt possible because the rock itself was too small. If anything would have been the rocks fault it would have broken the bigger rock it had hit. So that was out the window of options. He had to think of a second reason though. Why would this be here? And what was it? He crept over slowly before throwing the kunai. There was no spark. Normaly the kunai would spark on a rock. for some reason the kunai stuck. No blood either. wood? Impossible. what would a chunk of wood be doing in this area of the woods. He walked over to pull is kunai out. Pulling on his he lifted up a wooden tablet. It had been hidden under the rocks to keep rom getting wet. Now it was possobly going to warp. He took it running back in."What is this?" He said looking at it before setting it down. "It looks like the ten commandments" He chuckled. Of course he had a bad sense of humor. why not? He didnt believe in it. And so it seemed foolish to him. Howwever that was irrelevant. He tried to read he carvings in the wood, but it was a weird language. "Hmm" He pondered. where did this come from? He wanted to understand it. He would see if there was abook on this language.He had to look over in his library of languages. He kept different translation books. And as a result could translate things well into different languages. finding a book he began to read it. "Its apparently like a necronomicon." He said looking at it. "Its only an excerpt though" He said. "Fascinating. Ill really read it tomorrow though" He said before setting it down. He then went over and began to sleep for the night.
The next day was an odd one of most cases. He hadnt seen anything like the odd chunk of wood he had found the day before. Interestingly enough it was that of an old scripture text language spoken by people that used to live here in these land much longer ago. He looked at it oddly He was trying to find the right book to transcribe it into an audible language. He could read languages well and then speak what they meant in his current language. But as far as annunciation was, a problem lied. It was no serious issue though. He would overcome most of that by writing down what he needed in their characters and let them go on the though that he was unable to speak for some reason. It was actually entertaining to tease them with the possible reasons as to why he wasnt speaking like the "Normal human being" should. He began to translate the words.
"To the one who seeks a treasure, you should turn away from here. It has been mined away and there is no longer a prize in these grounds other then the traps that lay within the burial ground, of King....." There was a smudge on the name of the king. well rather, the part of wood where that was wasnt well maintained.
"Oh.....so there was a treasure here?" He said looking at the tabled trying to think of what kind of treasure might be here worth taking. He had know there was a few caves around him, but to think there may be riches hidden in each one of them....that was a great turn of events. However, He remembered movies on this sort of thing. There was always boobie traps, and silly boulder that rolled down to squish the curious explorer. Although he was an innocent in the cave here, he wondered if there was some dangers to his home away from home as a result.
He stood up and began to slowly walk around the outlining of his home wondering about each step he was taking. Would there be a string or cable? Perhaps a spike wedged upwards from beneath the surface of earth that he thought was there? Maybe even a lack of precaution from himself could cause him to fall and as a result, set off some alarm that would make the cave fall in on itself. This made him think on ways to avoid and find these "Possible threats". He had to resolve any possible conflict he may have forged with the dead king that might have lied here too. He didnt want a dead host king to fight. He had enough time dealing with ninjas. Ghosts were an entirely different game to him. He didnt want to mess with that at all. He placed his hand on the wall. He didnt want o lose the hand either, but being that he was near the wall, he would rather it be a hand lost, then a stab in the vitals by a side stream arrow. "Oh, curse you Indiana Jones movies for making me think such silly things" he said before continuing. He took in a deep breath before starting to scream and run back to his bed area with his arms flailing to see if he could set off any alarms. About halfway into this he was coming to the realization that he had found a tablet that was long ago buried there. If there was something here once, It was probably gone by now, right?
(106)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:52 pm
^
The post above me is not 105 lines. Please fix it Chill. By my count there are 56 lines in the above post, but you are welcome to count them yourself.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:05 pm
ok, then help me out so I get it. Are we counting sentences? what qualifies as a line so that I know the perfect official standard?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:12 pm
When you're in the pre-post you count them up and those are the lines. IN Madam's Ultimate Guide there is an example in how to count lines just in case you need an example.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:29 pm
Ok, cool. Um I edited it.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 11:39 pm
I edited everything and helped you out,
:3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:01 am
Finding time now in itself was an anoying thing to do because his village needed him. He was a man now and he had to tend to a mans buisness, however today was the day Mace had been planning and waiting for, for a couple of weeks. the day he would actually get to train a little bit. He got excited by looking at his old stomping grounds. the rubble from broken stone. The blasted areas from bad practice. All of these things were great. He remembered so much from being here, yet he understood something as well. He had only just begun. It was these times when he got to meditate on his life that he truly became stronger. For a muscle with no brain cannot do for itself. Today he would meditate.
He then reached to his side before drawing out his two blades. At the normal glance they looked like knives not worthy of being called katana, however, that was how he liked it. The factor wasnt in his knives size, but in his glowing blades. As he focused, they slowly began glowing. Then he opened his eyes. As he did so the blades began eminating a blade shaped chakra! The blades were now much more lengthy, however they were extended to a greater distance then before. This was raw life energybeing poured into weaponry. A rare sight to those who do not wield it themselves. he then looked over to see a wooden log layed over nearby. Leaping into the air he came down crashing hard into the wood. No dust flew up from his attack. however it sliced the log into three sections. Standing back up he looked at it. Satisfied he put his blades away. They were definitely functioning properly. Not that he had many battles to wage anymore, but he did feel relatively safer knowing he had working weapons anyways.
He then sat down beginning to think on things lost or from long ago. It still hurt to think about her. She was his motivational pain. He had to keep going so that when he did die she may reckognize him in the afterlife. He had to be better! He hungered for more opportunity to avenge and satisfy the pain of his torn heart. However at the same time he was locked here. What else was there for him to do? he never went to battle anymore so he couldnt relieve his pain into the bloodshed of his enemies. all he could do was sit on a throne and file papers. Seldom was there a threat only he could resolve. He had to climb these ranks and earn honor only to be betrayed by people who believed they were going to control him. He was......a puppet.
he clenched his fist and a single tear ran down the face of closed eyes. He was miserable, yet happy with his sucess. He was where every man dreamed they could be. Yet he wasnt happy with it. He needed closure. Maybe he had to visit her grave. He needed to connect with his unfinished buisness. He had to attain peace of mind. An unrestly leader was nothing more then a threat to his nations politics. It would make him do more bad things then good, which almost made him want to quit. However he couldnt quit. This just couldnt happen.
((41))
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
