Okay.
The main Character in my story Death's Illusion is about this 16-17 year old girl.
When she was 6 she was hit by a cart, and lost her memory.
She was found by a old couple that took her in as her grandparents and taught her what they knew.
Her adoptive Grandparents happen to be The First Necromancer, and the First Healer/Fleshmage.
They christen the girl Isara when they take her in, and Isara grows to be proficient in both Necromancy and Healing.
When Isara turns 16 (beginning of the story) Deceus (the first Necromancer) accuses her of stealing his Tome of the Dead, his journal, which is very powerful and extremely dangerous in the wrong hands. She overhears the accusations before he confronts her with them, and he also says that he can't trust her because of a powerful illusion shielding her true nature from him.
That night, Isara flees her long known home, it has lost it's welcome after finding out how much her supposed grandparents have lied to her.
Thus, Isara becomes cold hearted and distrustful of all she comes across.
After several weeks of traveling Isara reaches a city, after some thought, goes to a seer to get a few answers.
Let's just say, the seer doesn't help much, giving cryptic answers about the location of the book, the illusion on Isara (Whom the seer can see right though) and as to her real family are.
My hands hurt. I think I'll stop here.
What do you guys think so far?
The main Character in my story Death's Illusion is about this 16-17 year old girl.
When she was 6 she was hit by a cart, and lost her memory.
She was found by a old couple that took her in as her grandparents and taught her what they knew.
Her adoptive Grandparents happen to be The First Necromancer, and the First Healer/Fleshmage.
They christen the girl Isara when they take her in, and Isara grows to be proficient in both Necromancy and Healing.
When Isara turns 16 (beginning of the story) Deceus (the first Necromancer) accuses her of stealing his Tome of the Dead, his journal, which is very powerful and extremely dangerous in the wrong hands. She overhears the accusations before he confronts her with them, and he also says that he can't trust her because of a powerful illusion shielding her true nature from him.
That night, Isara flees her long known home, it has lost it's welcome after finding out how much her supposed grandparents have lied to her.
Thus, Isara becomes cold hearted and distrustful of all she comes across.
After several weeks of traveling Isara reaches a city, after some thought, goes to a seer to get a few answers.
Let's just say, the seer doesn't help much, giving cryptic answers about the location of the book, the illusion on Isara (Whom the seer can see right though) and as to her real family are.
My hands hurt. I think I'll stop here.
What do you guys think so far?
