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Talon Valentine
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:31 pm


Since the majority of my poems are super short, I will just post them all in this one thread. I will put the title of each one so that it is centered and bold(if they have titles) or I will just put the date that I wrote them. If you come up with a good title for a poem that doesnt have one, or even for one that does, please post your suggestion in the comments thread.

Thank you for taking the time to read.  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:43 pm


Tell Me


Look at me
Tell me baby,
What do you see?
Inside my heart is cold
But I never really know
Look at me

Hey there baby
What do you know?
Can you revive me
From this shadow
Tell me baby
Look at me


All I love is you
But do you,
Love me too?
All I want to know
Is how you feel for me.
Look at me


I give you my heart
I give you my soul
I give you everything
Just to know


Tell me
What do you see?
Tell me
What do you know?
Tell me
How do you feel?
Tell me
Baby do you love me still?

Talon Valentine
Captain


Talon Valentine
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:15 pm


08-09-08



My mind starts to spin
As I slowly drift down again.
Slowly drifting towards the darkest light
Falling into an ever deeping night.
Am I able to rise above
All the noise of push and shove?
Slowly my view changes
As my sight rearranges.
Darkness creeps closer
Covering me like a lover.
Light begins to fade
As I disappate.
Sinking as if in water
Only diving farther.
Crying out but I cant be heard
The water muffles my word.
Is this my end
Never to be heard from again?
It this all there is
Leaving behind my sis?
I don't want to die
Why should I?
Life holds too much fun
Ever since this begun.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:24 pm


11-07-08

Is this love that I see?
All around me?
Or am I being blind
To the truth in kind?
All I want is your touch
Hold my hand at lunch.
I close my eyes and see your face
I feel like this is a race.
Who is to say I'm wrong
When my feelings are this strong?
All I wish is to be with you
Could that soon come true?
You hold me tight and love me
When will that again be?
Your the only who never lied
Your the one who tried.
And yet I turned away
What more can I say?
I'm sorry for everything
I just wanted to sing.
Come to me
Let us be
My friends are blind
To the struggle in my mind.
I want to be with you
But is what I feel true?
I'm so confused right now
Sweat upon my brow.
Please help me to decide
What I want to do with my life.

Talon Valentine
Captain


Talon Valentine
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:25 pm


Alone

She screams to the sky
Just leave me alone!
Everyone crowding her
I'll be there they say.
And yet,
Where are they this day?
The girl cries
Tears fall and are lost.
She is empty inside.
They all left her.
She sits alone
Alone.
Darkness surrounds her.
She pulls the blade close.
Just one she says
So I dont feel so alone.
Yet she is still alone.
Alone in the darkness.
No one cares anymore.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:28 pm


R.I.P.

Tears run quickly down my cheeks
as I stop to think
He was 24
so young and full
Although I did not know him personally
I still feel the loss felt by his family
One life so quickly extinguished
How can life be so cold?
When one as young as him passes,
it makes us think.
I have never prayed so much
as I did that day.
You will be greatly missed
Our brother in Metal Mulisha!

Jeremy Lusk of Metal Mulisha passed away February 10th after failing to land his signature move, the Hart Attack. I will forever remember January 16, 2009 as the day I saw him laughing and smiling with his Mulisha brothers.

Talon Valentine
Captain

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