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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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 Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:39 pm
I have taken the time to think up of a new contest. So, here it goes.
Do YOU want to win a contest? Do YOU want to win the prize that goes along with it? Do YOU want to become awesome? Well, here you can do only two of those three! Isn't that great!?
YOU CAN WIN 10,000 GAIA GOLD, AND EASILY!!! Now here is the cool thing!
All YOU, members of I.L.O.N.K., have to do is write a short story, and whichever story I deem best will be the winner of 10,000 gaia gold. Isn't that GREAT!?!?
~RULES~
1-Do NOT bump here
2-You may chat here if you wish.
3-Only post ONE story per member.
4-Do NOT spam, flame, or pagestretch.
5-Follow the guild's and Gaia's ToS.
6-If you follow these rules, I think we will be fine.
7-I may add rules as I see fit.
8-Each contest's terms will either stay the same, or change.
~CONTESTS~ {{ I will be holding different contests here, not just one. }}
1-Short stories. -Winner=Tushiji-chan
2-Avi Art -Winner=To Be Decided Reward-Also to be decided
~CONTESTANTS~
-Open
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Good luck, and have fun.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:43 pm
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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:48 pm
Ah, but that is what is wonderful about my contests. All you have to do, is post what is needed for the contest, and I will put you into the contestants section, which I will add in a little bit.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:51 pm
0therw0rld- Ah, but that is what is wonderful about my contests. All you have to do, is post what is needed for the contest, and I will put you into the contestants section, which I will add in a little bit. oohh brilliant : d ill start now
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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:53 pm
Tushiji-chan 0therw0rld- Ah, but that is what is wonderful about my contests. All you have to do, is post what is needed for the contest, and I will put you into the contestants section, which I will add in a little bit. oohh brilliant : D ill start now Good choice. ;D I will go ahead and add you to the contestants section.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 4:01 pm
@.@ Okie Dokie... I shall be a contestant xD ~Thinks~ o.o
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 4:07 pm
this is what i have so far D: I have writers block atm :/ Lennie lay there in the dirt, letting the cool rain clean his blood-soaked body, or what was left of it. He was going to die here and he knew it. A tall, gracious woman with black curly hair raced up to his broken existence and smirked wickedly and kicked him in the stomach, making him flinch “that’ll teach you to mess with me.” She whispered in his torn ear. She effortlessly hauled him up from the ground by his throat and analysed his face for a brief moment. “I….never…ment...To...” “Too late” She cut in before hurling him into the lake close by, making a very clumsy crashing sound as his limp body broke through the icy water. “that’ll teach him to not steal my money, b***h”. Sora was the kind of person who liked order and peace, she would take the law into her own hands when she wanted to, especially when she is irritated and, unfortunately for our dear friend Lennie, today was not her day. She put her hands on the back of her head and sighed, wishing that some people would just disappear. She slumped into the opposite and strolled away, her hands firmly in the pockets of her combats. When was life going to throw anything interesting at her? She let out a large sigh, and let her mind wonder for a while.
It had been 3 hours since she put her feet on auto pilot while she was day dreaming, taking her wherever they wanted, and It's was only just then when she realised she was in the middle of an unhabited forest. Nice. Some exitement, for once. She analysed her surroundings, estimating how high the evergreens were, what type of birds were fluttering about and what animal had made what tracks. This was all new to her. Sora had never once stepped foot out of the city, only to ever sit and think by the lake, anyway. Now she was'nt surrounded by concrete and cars, but by the unknown.
The first thing Sora wanted to do was explore, but she wasnt THAT stupid, she knew that could put her in even more danger. So she decided her best option was to find her way out and come back another time. As she started walking down the dirt path, barely visable from all the nettles and leaves, hoping that would be her escape; but oh how wrong she was.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:18 pm
Its a little long xD But I most likely could have made it longer ._.''
Running through the thick, Scary forest at 12 O' clock at night, Not wanting to look back and see what was behind me. Suddenly my body gave a violent jerk, Landing on the ground face first. Sitting up I see what looks like blood red eyes staring at me, I walk over there, Shaking a bit from fear. Bending down I picked up what looked like a strange book, Its eyes staring deeply into mine.
"Nana!!" The voice echoed in my ears, I turned around and looked around at the desolate forest. A shadow in the trees became clear that it was only Alexander, My best friend.
"Yes, Alexander?" I walked over to him, Forgetting the book was in my hands.
"I think we should get going now..." Alexander commented, looking down at the book. His voice suddenly lost in his throat.. His eyes filled with horror widening so. "N-Nana.. W-W-Where did y-you get that bb-book?" He stammered, Remembering his past in a flashback.
"Alexander my son..." Samantha's eyes were very calming as she spoke to her son. Calming him down. However, That didnt last long as the book on the table started glowing, a terrible demon appeared. Swinging his claws at Alexander's mother, She coughed up blood. The demon had struck her in her heart. She was now dead from the demon's poison.
"I-In the bushes, I totally forgot I had this!" She looked up at her friend in time to see two tears fall from his eyes. The book glowed, And once again the demon showed. Swinging its poisonous claws at the two friends, It disappeared in a dark cloud of smoke. The two friends suffered, Untill they fell into a internal sleep... Never to awake again.
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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:50 pm
Akikan Its a little long xD But I most likely could have made it longer ._.'' Running through the thick, Scary forest at 12 O' clock at night, Not wanting to look back and see what was behind me. Suddenly my body gave a violent jerk, Landing on the ground face first. Sitting up I see what looks like blood red eyes staring at me, I walk over there, Shaking a bit from fear. Bending down I picked up what looked like a strange book, Its eyes staring deeply into mine. "Nana!!" The voice echoed in my ears, I turned around and looked around at the desolate forest. A shadow in the trees became clear that it was only Alexander, My best friend. "Yes, Alexander?" I walked over to him, Forgetting the book was in my hands. "I think we should get going now..." Alexander commented, looking down at the book. His voice suddenly lost in his throat.. His eyes filled with horror widening so. "N-Nana.. W-W-Where did y-you get that bb-book?" He stammered, Remembering his past in a flashback. "Alexander my son..." Samantha's eyes were very calming as she spoke to her son. Calming him down. However, That didnt last long as the book on the table started glowing, a terrible demon appeared. Swinging his claws at Alexander's mother, She coughed up blood. The demon had struck her in her heart. She was now dead from the demon's poison. "I-In the bushes, I totally forgot I had this!" She looked up at her friend in time to see two tears fall from his eyes. The book glowed, And once again the demon showed. Swinging its poisonous claws at the two friends, It disappeared in a dark cloud of smoke. The two friends suffered, Untill they fell into a internal sleep... Never to awake again. I'm a little confuzed. First, there's a mother and her son in a forest. Then, in the next paragraph, they have the book on the table. I thought they were in a forest. o.o;; Then, there was something to do with two friends. Where'd that come from? Honestly, though, you have talent. But it's a little confuzing.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:03 pm
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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:10 pm
Ah, ok, ok..You already got it up there o: Ty 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:16 pm
0therw0rld- Akikan Its a little long xD But I most likely could have made it longer ._.'' Running through the thick, Scary forest at 12 O' clock at night, Not wanting to look back and see what was behind me. Suddenly my body gave a violent jerk, Landing on the ground face first. Sitting up I see what looks like blood red eyes staring at me, I walk over there, Shaking a bit from fear. Bending down I picked up what looked like a strange book, Its eyes staring deeply into mine. "Nana!!" The voice echoed in my ears, I turned around and looked around at the desolate forest. A shadow in the trees became clear that it was only Alexander, My best friend. "Yes, Alexander?" I walked over to him, Forgetting the book was in my hands. "I think we should get going now..." Alexander commented, looking down at the book. His voice suddenly lost in his throat.. His eyes filled with horror widening so. "N-Nana.. W-W-Where did y-you get that bb-book?" He stammered, Remembering his past in a flashback. "Alexander my son..." Samantha's eyes were very calming as she spoke to her son. Calming him down. However, That didnt last long as the book on the table started glowing, a terrible demon appeared. Swinging his claws at Alexander's mother, She coughed up blood. The demon had struck her in her heart. She was now dead from the demon's poison. "I-In the bushes, I totally forgot I had this!" She looked up at her friend in time to see two tears fall from his eyes. The book glowed, And once again the demon showed. Swinging its poisonous claws at the two friends, It disappeared in a dark cloud of smoke. The two friends suffered, Untill they fell into a internal sleep... Never to awake again. I'm a little confuzed. First, there's a mother and her son in a forest. Then, in the next paragraph, they have the book on the table. I thought they were in a forest. o.o;; Then, there was something to do with two friends. Where'd that come from? Honestly, though, you have talent. But it's a little confuzing. Before it started the paragraph with the mother it says "Remembering his past in a flashback" XD Its only a flash back at that part^^ But he was in the forest with the flash back.
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Azariel_The_Fallen_Angel Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:35 pm
Ryu Kyon7 Ah, ok, ok..You already got it up there o: Ty 3nodding Not a problem. :3 And, please, don't be offended by anything I said in that PM. It would be nice to be friends with one such as yourself.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:38 pm
Akikan 0therw0rld- Akikan Its a little long xD But I most likely could have made it longer ._.'' Running through the thick, Scary forest at 12 O' clock at night, Not wanting to look back and see what was behind me. Suddenly my body gave a violent jerk, Landing on the ground face first. Sitting up I see what looks like blood red eyes staring at me, I walk over there, Shaking a bit from fear. Bending down I picked up what looked like a strange book, Its eyes staring deeply into mine. "Nana!!" The voice echoed in my ears, I turned around and looked around at the desolate forest. A shadow in the trees became clear that it was only Alexander, My best friend. "Yes, Alexander?" I walked over to him, Forgetting the book was in my hands. "I think we should get going now..." Alexander commented, looking down at the book. His voice suddenly lost in his throat.. His eyes filled with horror widening so. "N-Nana.. W-W-Where did y-you get that bb-book?" He stammered, Remembering his past in a flashback. "Alexander my son..." Samantha's eyes were very calming as she spoke to her son. Calming him down. However, That didnt last long as the book on the table started glowing, a terrible demon appeared. Swinging his claws at Alexander's mother, She coughed up blood. The demon had struck her in her heart. She was now dead from the demon's poison. "I-In the bushes, I totally forgot I had this!" She looked up at her friend in time to see two tears fall from his eyes. The book glowed, And once again the demon showed. Swinging its poisonous claws at the two friends, It disappeared in a dark cloud of smoke. The two friends suffered, Untill they fell into a internal sleep... Never to awake again. I'm a little confuzed. First, there's a mother and her son in a forest. Then, in the next paragraph, they have the book on the table. I thought they were in a forest. o.o;; Then, there was something to do with two friends. Where'd that come from? Honestly, though, you have talent. But it's a little confuzing. Before it started the paragraph with the mother it says "Remembering his past in a flashback" XD Its only a flash back at that part^^ But he was in the forest with the flash back. Ah, that makes sense now. A bit of advice to you, try to put a symbol like ~----------------------~ to show a change in the story. I was a little confuzed. :S
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:41 pm
0therw0rld- Akikan 0therw0rld- Akikan Its a little long xD But I most likely could have made it longer ._.'' Running through the thick, Scary forest at 12 O' clock at night, Not wanting to look back and see what was behind me. Suddenly my body gave a violent jerk, Landing on the ground face first. Sitting up I see what looks like blood red eyes staring at me, I walk over there, Shaking a bit from fear. Bending down I picked up what looked like a strange book, Its eyes staring deeply into mine. "Nana!!" The voice echoed in my ears, I turned around and looked around at the desolate forest. A shadow in the trees became clear that it was only Alexander, My best friend. "Yes, Alexander?" I walked over to him, Forgetting the book was in my hands. "I think we should get going now..." Alexander commented, looking down at the book. His voice suddenly lost in his throat.. His eyes filled with horror widening so. "N-Nana.. W-W-Where did y-you get that bb-book?" He stammered, Remembering his past in a flashback. "Alexander my son..." Samantha's eyes were very calming as she spoke to her son. Calming him down. However, That didnt last long as the book on the table started glowing, a terrible demon appeared. Swinging his claws at Alexander's mother, She coughed up blood. The demon had struck her in her heart. She was now dead from the demon's poison. "I-In the bushes, I totally forgot I had this!" She looked up at her friend in time to see two tears fall from his eyes. The book glowed, And once again the demon showed. Swinging its poisonous claws at the two friends, It disappeared in a dark cloud of smoke. The two friends suffered, Untill they fell into a internal sleep... Never to awake again. I'm a little confuzed. First, there's a mother and her son in a forest. Then, in the next paragraph, they have the book on the table. I thought they were in a forest. o.o;; Then, there was something to do with two friends. Where'd that come from? Honestly, though, you have talent. But it's a little confuzing. Before it started the paragraph with the mother it says "Remembering his past in a flashback" XD Its only a flash back at that part^^ But he was in the forest with the flash back. Ah, that makes sense now. A bit of advice to you, try to put a symbol like ~----------------------~ to show a change in the story. I was a little confuzed. :S X}
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