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 Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 8:29 pm
What can I do when it's already gone?
Flown away to stay forever.
What can I do when it's already gone?
It will never return to me.
Will it stay safe in the place that it's kept?
I can only hope that it does.
Will it stay safe in the place that it's kept?
With you I am sure that it will.
I will be elated if this works,
And crushed if it doesn't.
Please make your decision,
On what to do with my heart.
I need ideas for a name and critiques. Anything appriciated!
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 9:25 pm
It is good. A name for this poem could be Stay or Go
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