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 Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 6:30 pm
I am lost in a world of turmoil.
I am lost in a city of depression.
The war weakens my inner soul.
I am lost in war and unknown love.
The terror that drives my people away is maddening.
Vile creatures send us into lost hope.
My mind is filled with sorrow as we hide while men fight.
I wish not to be lost and hope for a better tomorrow.
The war is not yet over and will never end.
I am lost in tears and mishap.
I have been found in the sea of people.
The war is over once and for all.
Our heroes found a way to save us.
I am not lost but I am found and my true love came to call.
((This poem is based off of the Lord of the Rings where a woman is living during the war. Hope you like....it may not be very good but oh well....))
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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:34 pm
wow! that was very nice and made a lot of sense, my poems "birdwalk" from the topic, but that was GREAT!
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Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 9:44 am
lacus889 wow! that was very nice and made a lot of sense, my poems "birdwalk" from the topic, but that was GREAT! thanks a lot...one of my first actuall good ones...LotR inspired me to write it. ^^
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 10:58 am
That was so intense and profound but I love it because I write profound lyrics. smile biggrin 3nodding
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:41 pm
well u have to share ur lyrics with us one day, i would love to read them ^^
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 7:19 pm
Okay maybe...I will share them...You see I only share them to lyke really close friends and to lyke a few other people. 3nodding
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