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 Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:48 pm
I sit here and wonder what I could write
To convey this anger and this spite,
I sit here and wonder what I should feel
Should my heart burn red?
Is this fuel real?
She made a choice
Yes!
Why can't I accept it?
She chose him over me
Why must I act so pathetic?
He obviously has something that I don't
So just cut my losses and move on,
My mind is making this crystal clear
But my heart is singing a different song.
My perception feels balled and twisted like an old piece of fur,
Common sense would tell me to leave this girl
But I can't............................................
...........................................................
I love her.
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Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 8:56 am
I really like it! the best part though is your metaphors... it flows well too
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:37 pm
Lyetta790 I really like it! the best part though is your metaphors... it flows well too Thanx alot!
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Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:39 pm
Love it! Yes the metaphors in it are really nice ^_^, I love how so many people can comapre to it to =D
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:25 pm
Yeah 3nodding It's very nice.
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