Thoughts?
Pers'nally, I didn't like it as much I expected to, although I did enjoy it. I liked the writing tremendously at first, but then my fondness for it sort of... diminished? Not exactly - I still liked individual images, and heaven knows there were an overflow of really lovely scenes, but I tired of it nevertheless, somehow. Maybe if I had read it in multiple sittings, instead of in nearly one; as it was I tired of prettiness and twisted glamor and started longing for something more... haha, I don't even know. Solid? Maybe. Prosaic, yes. Mediocre. I didn't like Astrid as much as I could have, I suppose. Or, well, that's not exactly true; I liked her fine, sometimes I loved her, but I didn't enjoy reading about her overmuch. Call me a - I don't know what the word would be, 'someone in denial', but that doesn't roll off the tongue, does it? - well, yes, I am in denial but I don't enjoy reading about all those extremes, agony or ecstasy or both, /constantly/ almost, even in worlds where the middle ground seemed to hold sway. And I would have preferred humor and... more humanity, sometimes, the humanity of the majority rather than the extraordinary, where she had strewn beauty.
I also had trouble with the ending - not the ending as a whole, actually I quite liked that, but the final lines, which were abruptly, jarringly filled with thoughts of L.A. and California. And I wondered - wonder - about Ingrid's choice, about the supposed 'tempering' of her extremity, Astrid's sole triumph, when maybe that was really just an extension of Ingrid's freedom, ambiguous, unexplained. But perhaps that was just me.
So what about the rest of you who've read it? Did you encounter a similar limit to how much of the aesthetic glory you could swallow?
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