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 Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:40 am
sorry i was not posting here ive mainly posted in the arena but heres my latest poem.(sorry for grammatical and spelling errors)
Choices
As the snow melts
and a new season begins
we all get a chance
to star a new life
what life shall we choose
In this new beggining
should we keep our past as it was
or adopt to what society guides you to
Should we look toward the future
or dread on the old past
what outcome awaits us
at the end of each path
Should we start a new life
and just hope for the best
Or stay with your old life
until time takes you away
What you decide
falls upon you
whether you prosper in your choice
or whither away filled with regret
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:15 pm
Just the thing itself (not grammar and spelling), is good. It is repetitious, but lots of things are - it's not necessarily a bad thing, and can be a plus. In this case, I'm thinking it shows the thought process.
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